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Review #1, by raznilla Evil Treasures

13th July 2011:
Fantastic story! Very well written. Your descriptions in the beginning set up an awesome image in my head. I LOVE when that happens, so naturally, I was thrilled. And little Tom has just the right amount of suppressed evil.

Just one thing: near the end, your awesome descriptions seemed to fade a bit! Still there, but it would have been great to see a bit more.

Not an huge issue :) just if you wanted to tweak a tad! Awesome story, can't wait to see more from you!

Author's Response: My first review! :D Thank you for the tip!

I'm glad that you liked Tom! I figured something must have triggered his 'evilness' to come out and I wanted to write it, heheh ~ ^^

The beginning was a lot easier to write for me and I also took longer to write it down. Personally, the part with dialogue was distinctly harder to write just because I wasn't sure what to do with the dialogue. It definitely needs tweaking and maybe re-writing now that I read it again. ^^;

Well, have a great day! :D
Angelic Flowers


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