Amy :O You wrote Dramione? I didn't think you we're a Dramione fan!
Reading this... I can say I found it seriously cute with the relationship that had transpired between them. There was the love and tenderness between Hermione and Draco which you only see in a handful of fics. Some portray their relationship as volatile but I'm glad to see this one didn't.
My one critisism was that it was too short. You could have expanded on how they got together rather than saying Ron could never match up to Draco. You can obviously see so much love between Hermione and Draco but it would be nice to have seen why Hermione and Ron fell out of love.
It was a nice touch at the end having Draco propose to her as it sort of was the perfect setting and time :)Author's Response: I did! And I'm not! I hate Dramione. This was a present for someone and it nearly killed me writing it!
I could never see Hermione being in any other type of relationship. The way most people show her is so out of character you start to wonder how they managed to think it up!
Ooh, I never thought of that, but it would have totally worked! I wish I'd thought of it when I wrote it! :P
Thank you so much for the review!! Report Review
Ooh they're getting married!!! I'm not a big Dramione fan but ultimately I like some of them! Good job here =D good thing ginger convinced you to post it =PAuthor's Response: I'm not a big Dramione fan either :P Blame Maria for this fic ;) Thank you! Report Review
Caomoyl I loved it. Sweet, cutie and right to the point. I really liked the idea of useing Hermione's Birthday. I enjoyed that Draco was thoughful and that he had changed after the war. I do have a question how soon after the war was this set? Also the way that you used this sceen to show how your thought on Dramione would go down, it has its own little charm.
SlytherinAuthor's Response: I'm glad you like it =D Umm, it is quite far ahead. They will have dated for a while and things..but I'm not sure exactly how long after. Aww, thank you =D Report Review
Ehehe, love it! Well, as much as I can love a Dramione. Anyways, I agree with WIN *had to stalk reviews to see if I had reviewed this* that you did take a ship that is so overdone and usually a painful read and made it into something that I can see happening. And I did go "Aww!" each and every time I read the ending, so YAY for making me not want to go "blaaah" but rather "they are so adorable together" by the end! I can assure you that doesn't usually happen! Anywho, love your writing dear and I hope to see more updates on your stuff soon!
gingersnape, GryffindorAuthor's Response: Aww, thank you =D I'm so glad that it actually was believeable. I think I said this in responce to WIN's review, but it was the one thing I was worried about when writing it. That and the fact that I didn't want to ruin my brain =P You actually aww'ed!?! Wow, I wasn't expecting that. I was expecting people to throw up =P Aww, thank you again =D Updates? *hides* You know what Babushka is like... Report Review
Aw what a cute little one shot! I like how you made Draco thoughtful. You know, Ron didn't show any signs of being thoughtful until the very end of book 7, and I like that, despite the way he's portrayed int he books, you've shown that difference between Ron and him. It makes the tone of the story and this ship more believable. And he's so charming, taking her to this place to ask her to marry him!
I also like how Draco says "It really is beautiful, just like you" and Hermione responds with "Just Like you too." Rather than saying he's handsome or something like that. I think Draco could be beautiful...I always pictured him as a majestic coward of sorts, and I guess that's what he's portrayed like in the books.
anyway, you've taken a ship that's very overdone and sometimes hard to believe and made it relatively believable, so that's great :) well done!
LRAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you =D I'm glad that it's believable =D That's always the one goal with writing, and I'm glad I managed it =D
I find beautiful a stronger word, that's why I used it =D
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I will always keep saying that Dramione is the best ship ever and I really, really appreciate the fact that you wrote this to me just because you know how much I love the two of them!
The story is pretty cute and I love it!
Thanks dear, for the awesome bday gift (although I know how hard it was for you)! :D
Lots of love,
MariaAuthor's Response: Hahaha..and I will always disagree with you ;) =D
I'm glad you liked it =D
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Finally you wrote a Dramione! Wooohooo!! Very well done!!!=P
Ps: this comment was very spontaneous =PAuthor's Response: Haha..don't expect anymore =P It was torture =P Thanks =D
HAHAHAHA =P Report Review
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