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Review #1, by SunshineDaisies Velvet

11th July 2015:
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That was SO sweet! I really like finding happy stories, and this was just lovely! I loved the opening paragraph, that created such beautiful imagery. It's so fun to imagine them running in a field hand-in-hand. That scene is just adorable! And I loved that Draco knew all these things about Hermione, whether she had mentioned it once, or never at all. It shows a real dedication to the relationship, and it shows that he really loves her. You can tell that she loves him as well, and you portrayed their love so very well. They were absolutely adorable together! I loved that he proposed in this way. It's so simple but so romantic at the same time. Definitely fitting for a couple so in love. :) The whole thing was just so, so sweet, and so beautifully fluffy!

This was really lovely, and I'm so glad you decided to share it!

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Review #2, by Dojh167 Velvet

11th July 2015:
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Oh good, a break from the angst!

I'm not a huge Dramione fan, and it seems that you aren't either, but I'm glad that you took a step out of your comfort zone for this one (first and last) time.

I didn't think that it was necessary for you to state that this was the same bag that she had used when hunting for Horcruxes. It is such a notable artifact that we know what it is from the description in the sentence before.

I wonder why Hermione was so secretive about her birthday. It seems a bit uncharacteristic of her. But, by that detail, I am guessing that she and Draco have been close for less than a year.

So much fluff! It's definitely a bit too syrupy shippy for me, but I'm sure that your friend enjoyed it.


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Review #3, by ginerva_molly_weasley Velvet

18th July 2012:
Amy :O You wrote Dramione? I didn't think you we're a Dramione fan!

Reading this... I can say I found it seriously cute with the relationship that had transpired between them. There was the love and tenderness between Hermione and Draco which you only see in a handful of fics. Some portray their relationship as volatile but I'm glad to see this one didn't.

My one critisism was that it was too short. You could have expanded on how they got together rather than saying Ron could never match up to Draco. You can obviously see so much love between Hermione and Draco but it would be nice to have seen why Hermione and Ron fell out of love.

It was a nice touch at the end having Draco propose to her as it sort of was the perfect setting and time :)

Author's Response: I did! And I'm not! I hate Dramione. This was a present for someone and it nearly killed me writing it!
I could never see Hermione being in any other type of relationship. The way most people show her is so out of character you start to wonder how they managed to think it up!
Ooh, I never thought of that, but it would have totally worked! I wish I'd thought of it when I wrote it! :P
Thank you so much for the review!!

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Review #4, by KnightRoseSword Velvet

9th June 2012:
Ooh they're getting married!!! I'm not a big Dramione fan but ultimately I like some of them! Good job here =D good thing ginger convinced you to post it =P

Author's Response: I'm not a big Dramione fan either :P Blame Maria for this fic ;) Thank you!

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Review #5, by louise_loves_hp Velvet

14th August 2011:
Caomoyl I loved it. Sweet, cutie and right to the point. I really liked the idea of useing Hermione's Birthday. I enjoyed that Draco was thoughful and that he had changed after the war. I do have a question how soon after the war was this set? Also the way that you used this sceen to show how your thought on Dramione would go down, it has its own little charm.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it =D Umm, it is quite far ahead. They will have dated for a while and things..but I'm not sure exactly how long after. Aww, thank you =D

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Review #6, by gingersnape Velvet

5th August 2011:
Ehehe, love it! Well, as much as I can love a Dramione. Anyways, I agree with WIN *had to stalk reviews to see if I had reviewed this* that you did take a ship that is so overdone and usually a painful read and made it into something that I can see happening. And I did go "Aww!" each and every time I read the ending, so YAY for making me not want to go "blaaah" but rather "they are so adorable together" by the end! I can assure you that doesn't usually happen! Anywho, love your writing dear and I hope to see more updates on your stuff soon!
-your wifey

gingersnape, Gryffindor

Author's Response: Aww, thank you =D I'm so glad that it actually was believeable. I think I said this in responce to WIN's review, but it was the one thing I was worried about when writing it. That and the fact that I didn't want to ruin my brain =P You actually aww'ed!?! Wow, I wasn't expecting that. I was expecting people to throw up =P Aww, thank you again =D Updates? *hides* You know what Babushka is like...

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Review #7, by LovlyRita Velvet

21st July 2011:
Aw what a cute little one shot! I like how you made Draco thoughtful. You know, Ron didn't show any signs of being thoughtful until the very end of book 7, and I like that, despite the way he's portrayed int he books, you've shown that difference between Ron and him. It makes the tone of the story and this ship more believable. And he's so charming, taking her to this place to ask her to marry him!

I also like how Draco says "It really is beautiful, just like you" and Hermione responds with "Just Like you too." Rather than saying he's handsome or something like that. I think Draco could be beautiful...I always pictured him as a majestic coward of sorts, and I guess that's what he's portrayed like in the books.

anyway, you've taken a ship that's very overdone and sometimes hard to believe and made it relatively believable, so that's great :) well done!


Author's Response: Aw, thank you =D I'm glad that it's believable =D That's always the one goal with writing, and I'm glad I managed it =D

I find beautiful a stronger word, that's why I used it =D

Thanks again =D

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Review #8, by Maria Velvet

8th April 2011:
I will always keep saying that Dramione is the best ship ever and I really, really appreciate the fact that you wrote this to me just because you know how much I love the two of them!
The story is pretty cute and I love it!
Thanks dear, for the awesome bday gift (although I know how hard it was for you)! :D

Lots of love,

Author's Response: Hahaha..and I will always disagree with you ;) =D
I'm glad you liked it =D
No problem =D =D =D

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Review #9, by Lau Velvet

8th April 2011:
Finally you wrote a Dramione! Wooohooo!! Very well done!!!=P

Ps: this comment was very spontaneous =P

Author's Response: Haha..don't expect anymore =P It was torture =P Thanks =D

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