I love your series and I'm very much looking forward to the sequel to Our Little Secret which I for the life of me can not find. I know you probably have a lot going on or just can't find the time to update it. But please continue your amazing story and don't deprive us of your fantastic work. Report Review
I'm curious...was this before Scorpius found his initials in the Knights of Walpurgis (sp?) chamber? It must be...and I desperately want to know what happened after he cast that fireball. Roommates' reactions, if the hordes of cousins found out, other important things. I guess this means I'm off to search for the sequel! Report Review
When are you going to put up a new story?!? Report Review
Believe it or not, this is one of your stories I have never read before. I always planned to and then let it go until another time. I really enjoyed it. I can imagine how Rose felt. I don't like any of my writing to get out before I release it, and that would go double for personal writing. I can imagine how the Intruder would treat something so personal, written by one of the young Potter/Weasleys. Imagine the scandal! I also would've been too embarrassed to share my loss with a relatively new boyfriend. There's nothing worse than having a new love laugh at something you've done. Trust me, I remember. I think that was my ex's favorite thing to do:( I think my favorite parts were: thinking of Rose and Scorpius playing hide-n-seek in the dungeons after patrol and the concept of interpreting different kinds of hand holding. You are very creative. Excellent story and I'll get into the sequel soon.Author's Response: Thank you so much for finding the time to read and review this story! I know how busy you are, getting ready for yet another trip, so I heart you even more than I already do for noticing things in the story that reveal characters. :) Report Review
brilliant, as per usual. i love your writing and your stories, and the way you portray rose and scorpius!Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I think they're a great couple and I'll do my best to bring them to life. :) Report Review
D'aw. I love them!!! But I'm sure you already knew that, after all, I say that in about every chapter review.. :D BUT ITS TRUE!! You are a stupendiferotacular ( a combination of the words stupendous, spectacular, and fabulous ) writer!Author's Response: I heart your mosh of words! The first chapter of the sequel should post on the 9th if the queue wait doesn't change, so cross your fingers with me. I'm looking forward to reading your reaction to what happens to Scorpius' plans! Report Review
Pumped for the sequel!!1 I love how Scorpius loved the journal, I knew he would hahaAuthor's Response: It's all about him, what guy could resist, heh. Thanks for reminding me about the sequel, I'm off to put the first chapter into the queue! Report Review
It's been a while, Kerichi. Hopefully I'll be able to catch up with all your chapters posted here. :)
Maybe your standards are a little high, only you'll know for sure, but to me, none of your one-shots lack the ability to stand on their own feet. Surely they come short in length, but you gave enough hints to the (main) plot so we can understand, for instance, Rose and Scorpius are dating, and Grandpa Lucius would kill him for this etc. So as I read them, I do not feel confused at all. Did I ever mention how much I liked the way you wrote series of stories in a way that they circle around a main plot structure (such as Rose beginning to like Scorpius after bringing him home for holiday and thus starting to date seriously)? We have the story about the two of them, and also respective stories about her father's reactions, Draco dealing with his own father in hopes of changing his mind etc. This "solar system"-ish structure of stories is even more readable than the average prequel/story/sequel/more-sequels storyline. It's multi-dimensional.
Oh, and about this story? The emotions were spot-on. i.e. if it were Lily with her dangerous journal, she would've been too relieved to kiss her boyfriend sfter finding it rather than locking it firmly like Rose here. Sometimes I wonder if Rosie were cool-headed enough to be sorted into Slytherin (or maybe Ravenclaw) instead of Gryffindor.
See you next time.
P.S. I'm waiting for chapter 12 to be proofread. Please take your time.Author's Response: You don't have to catch up with all the chapters, I'm just glad you're reading when you have the time. Thanks for the reassurance, I've read one shots based on chapter fics I hadn't read that didn't ground new readers in what had happened previously, and it felt like carelessness on the author's part. I always want readers to know I care. :)
Interesting thoughts about Rose! I've had Snape speculate that all women have Hufflepuff tendencies. :D Maybe they have Slytherin tendencies as well! Report Review
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