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Review #1, by Jujube Chapter Thirteen

13th September 2011:
I don't write reviews, neither good nor bad. I find that passing judgment on someone's work is too sensitive, too intimate a thing to do, so I refrain from it. But your story compelled me to come here and write this. I love the way you describe Severus, he is, as a previous reviewer said, balanced. Most fanfic writers make him display an abundance of angst and emotion, but he's not like that. He is the epitome of restraint. Alan Rickman captured that, you in your story captured that. I will add you to my RSS feeds, as I'm eagerly awaiting for the next chapter, I have to know why he was arrested. Please don't keep us waiting :)

Author's Response: I'm thrilled that you left me a review - thank you so much for your kind words! I know I've kept you all waiting for so long but I hope this chapter makes up for it :D Thank you again for your review and if you feel like it, let me know what you think of the next chapter too!

Lillibet x


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Review #2, by Minervas_soul Chapter Eleven

13th August 2011:
This is my absolute favorite chapter. I love the part with the piano. I'm a music person, and I can hear that piece in my head during this chapter. The moments between them are wonderful and you have done a wonderful job with illustrating the pain they share.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! You're so kind and I'm very glad you're still enjoying it. That piece of music is one of my favourite pieces and I was listening to it a lot when I was writing this chapter and I thought, why not actually include it? It seemed to work quite well and I'm happy with how it turned out. Hope you like the next chapter too :D

Lillibet x


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Review #3, by Katanimagus16 Chapter Ten

2nd August 2011:
Wow, yet again a job well done! It was easy to sense Severus' feelings as well as Minerva's. You are an incredibly talented writer in the way you convey each character's feelings and actions. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You have no idea how much your words are valued. I'm so glad that you are still enjoying this and I've already posted the next chapter so hopefully once it's been validated it will be up soon.

thank you so again!! Have a great day!

- Lillibet x


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Review #4, by Minervas_soul Chapter Ten

2nd August 2011:
I love the emotion that Severus displays in this chapter. You have a talent for writing him with enough emotion that the reader can understand what he is feeling, but not too much that he seems out of character.
And I wouldn't read much into the response at this website. I have a fic here and on Fanficnet and the one on Fanfic is doing so much better than this one on here. I do think the pairing has something to do with it. While I am becoming more and more of a MMSS fan, my own story is MMTR and I hinted at MMAD in the summary and I think that is pushing people away. But we must keep posting. Eventually people will read it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words. I find Severus really fun to write, even when he's sad, angry and all the rest lol. I just find him very interesting but the balance between my version of Severus and JK Rowlings version is sometimes difficult to keep in check. So I'm really pleased that you think I'm doing a good job :D

Also, you have me intrigued by your story - I find the mention of MMTR to be utterly irresistable! So I will be checking it out as soon as I get chance - actually, that sounds like a great way to spend my lunch break tomorrow!

An you're right, we must keep posting!

Thanks again for your kind words. It is very much appreciated! Hope you're having a wonderful day!

- Lillibet x


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Review #5, by Katanimagus16 Chapter Nine

31st July 2011:
There's not much more I can say than brilliant! I'm eager for the next chapter. I'm happy to say that I'm absolutely hooked on this story. You've taken my two favorite characters and put a dynamic light on them. So, thank you, and I can't wait until the next chapter comes along.

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Review #6, by Katanimagus16 Chapter Nine

31st July 2011:
There's not much more I can say than brilliant! I'm eager for the next chapter. I'm happy to say that I'm absolutely hooked on this story. You've taken my two favorite characters and put a dynamic light on them. So, thank you, and I can't wait until the next chapter comes along.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really pleased you're enjoying it so far. Thanks very much for the review! :D

- Lillibet x


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Review #7, by Minervas_soul Chapter Nine

25th July 2011:
I have read this story on FFnet and I have really enjoyed it. I love your writing style and this story. I thought this deserved a review. So, I hope to see more.

Author's Response: Aw thanks so much! And thanks for the review too. I'm really glad you're enjoying it. It doesn't seem to be doing too well on here, I think it's the pairing - puts some people off. But oh well :D
Thanks again!

- Lillibet x


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