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Review #1, by fuzzylogic Prologue: The wand maker, and his apprentice.

4th July 2011:
This is off to quite a good start. It could do with a bit of editing (I'd suggest a beta) but the plot seems quite original. I'd also suggest double spacing between lines of dialogue. It makes it clearer and easier to read. It is very interesting so far though, and I can't wait to read more!

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