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Review #1, by BrightStar Can We Talk?

30th April 2011:
Hi! BrightStar with your review!

I really liked this! You asked about cliches - yes, it is cliched, I'm not going to lie. HOWEVER, it was really just the end, and even so, it was still a nice ending! I wouldn't fault you on it. The way you write Scorose is anything but cliched, don't worry about that. Your Scorpius is very refreshing, I think I've said it before. Your writing flow is excellent, as are the little things like spelling and grammar.

It was a pleasure reading and reviewing your story, I hope you write more in future :)

Author's Response: :) Aww, thank you, love. I won't be writing anymore Scorose, for I'm more of a Hugo/Scorpius person ;) I'm very glad that you like it, though. Thank you so much for your wonderful reviews, love =D

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Review #2, by BrightStar Hogsmeade

16th April 2011:
Hi! Back again! I really like the fact Scorpius didnt take Rose back! Serves her right, methinks she needs to grow up! (Though I like jow you write her). The protective brother thing is overdone, but here its sweet because it's hugo.

I think maybe you should have explained Roses' regret about Scorpius more, but other than that, it was a really great chapter! :D

Author's Response: :) Thank you!! And thanks for taking time to read, love :)

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Review #3, by BrightStar The Kiss

16th April 2011:
Hey! BrightStar here with your review!

I really liked Rose and Lily as the two seekers, I always imagined them to play together but this fits too!

Great portrayal of Scorpius, really different than the way he is written elsewhere, which was such a refreshing change!

I thought there was too quick a transition between the match and the next scene, but that was the only real fault I found in coherence! Spelling and grammer all in order, good stuff!

Especially impressive since you don't like this pairing, reading on to the next chapter now!

- B x

Author's Response: I thought the same thing. This was the chapter I was really worried about. I didn't think I did too well, and it seemed rushed to me. I'm glad you like my Scorp =DD

And thank you again!!!


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