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7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Elleinad One

9th April 2013:
Hello! I really love this story. Lucy is, as you said, different. She's a Luna Lovegood type. Yet she manages to be completely unique. I love her! Please update soon! I originally read this a couple months ago but none of my favorite authors have updated in a while so I thought I'd reread it. Can't believe I forgot to review last time! So sorry! Anyway I really enjoyed reading this and I'm hoping you add to it!

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Review #2, by NightCrimson Chapter Two

9th March 2012:
Update! I like the idea but I don't really think it's going to be too long is it? :P
Just one year... And that part in the beginning about death was interesting.. I want to know why you added that! :P:P

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Review #3, by Cavell Chapter Two

25th February 2012:
This was a nice change from the usual pairings - and I quite liked Christopher and Lucy, as Lucy is mostly paired with one of Luna's twins, or something. However, his feelings towards her seemed to be a little abrupt - or maybe it's just me? Please update soon, the story sounds really interesting.

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Review #4, by marthenic Chapter Two

7th September 2011:
This is cool!! Can you update this? I really like the beginning...

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Review #5, by Insert_Witty_Comment_Here Chapter Two

4th July 2011:
I really like this - it has a very fresh feel to it, I've not really read many stories like this. I did feel like maybe Christopher's feelings towards Lucy in this chapter were a little abrupt - but hen this might just be his personality, I won't know until you continue the story and we get to know them all a bit better :D

All in all, excellent job!



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Review #6, by daliha One

8th April 2011:
Amazing start to a story. I'm already interested in reading the second chapter.

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Review #7, by Star_Kid_Love One

3rd April 2011:
I like it! :D
A fab start!!
I love how Lucy is so different to the generic daughter of percy that is always seen!
I also love your writing style! The introduction was really gripping and I definatley was to read more!

Please keep going with it :D
S_K_L xx

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