Its written nicely!
At first I thought that I just don't like the idea if Harry proposing in front of her family!
But then, maybe he would have done it that way!
Your story has really got me thinking! :)
Nice! :)

Author's Response: I can imagine Harry doing it in a more private way, but I couldn't get this idea out of my head, it had to be written. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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That was super lame.I mean,I seriously wanted to hurl.I just wish Harry and Ginny never dated and having him date someone better than Ginny,I'm-a-whore and proud of it Weasley.because J.K. Rowling totally ruined the book and my life.

Author's Response: That's a very interesting opinion.

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I like it. it was almost just how i pictured it! 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~ginny_malfoy22

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I like simple but affective x

Author's Response: Thank you, simple was what I was going for. Just a glance into their life. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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God One Short,but isn't it a bit earlier for a Propose?I mean,I could imagine Ron and Hermione are doing it at first,since these both have a stroner Bond somehow.But even them would wait a few Years,til after Training,School etc

It's up to you,it's just my View :D

Author's Response: I never actually said how long it had been since the war. You assumed that it was soon. In my head, it was a few years later. I also don't think that Ron and Hermione would get engaged first, either, since Ron would take years to build up the courage, and Hermione would be too stubborn to do it herself, But that's just my opinion.

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that was adorable! it was a really perfect way for him to propose Great job!

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