i think i was good, i hope that they become closer in later chapters

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Please continue, this story is great!

Author's Response: The sequel is in the works :)

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I hope that it will be continued, it is an enjoyable read. :)

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the last line of this chapter = genius.

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I think that I may die of sadness if you don't finish this story... I really want a sequel to this. I LOVED IT! If you would write a story in which Severus becomes a father figure to Harry, I might spontaneously combust with happiness. Do write a sequel to this. PLEASE!

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I laughed so I cried when I read this chapter xD Love the story by the way, one of the best stories I read with Snape/OC (and I have read lots of them ;) Thanks for the awesome story :D

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This is really really good!!
Ophelia was a very believable character and Snape's reactions to her presence were very real. He stayed in canon while changing at the same time. I loved it!!
Good Job! 10/10

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I absolutely loved this story! Very well written with impeccable characterizations. I really really REALLY hope you continue it!!

Author's Response: I plan to, I only need to finish the second part. I like to have them finished before posting so that you don't have to wait forever between chapters.

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on to the next chapter!

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I wonder when love might blossom...

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goodness - an affair with Harry. That's... unusual :) curious to see how this plays out.

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If he becomes all uptight now I will scream! - I mean, it was just moving along so nicely. Poor troubled snape.

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change of mood entirely, eh? I like how cuddly mr and mrs snape have become :)

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oh my, rivalry. Nice to see snape have the upper hand :)

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beginning to seem almost normal. is snape pouring memories into her dreams?

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so - chrildren. That should be exciting :) They are slowly warming up now... I'm so glad *sighs*

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Any chapter now I would think... no?

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perhaps their shared loathing can bring them together... are they ever going to like each other?

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maybe some emotion will be coming through at last?

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Hmm... I wonder if her lie becomes true. If they would only let each other know one another ... bah

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Some wedding night - seems like someon's got a lot of luggage. Hopefully they will find each other a little more interesting soon enough? Reading on to find out :)

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Hi :)
I rather like your writing. It's very down to earth and has a nice flow to it. I like the fact that your characters aren't overtly handsome or the likes and that their actions seem plausible and realistic. It makes me feel at ease when the writing is so smooth :) I'm looking forward to see what happens next. There's a lot of questions flying around and things between the lines... interesting.

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Intriguing story!
I've always loved the name Ophelia and am beginning to really warm to your character.
A very unique plot and original perspective.

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Brilliant! I can't wait for more

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Since when does Snape drive???

Author's Response: Since I decided he did.

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