Loved this story! i like how you put in humor but at the same time it was romantic Report Review
I liked it! This was a really cute oneshot and I liked how Lily and James just got together that night and that just so happend to be the night that their friends decided to spy on them. I think you did a good job with characterization for all of the characters so great job with that. It all flowed really well together but I would have liked to seen some description though since it all flowed well I dont think its really needed. This was a really cute and interesting idea on how Lily and James got together! I really enjoyed it! Great Job!
~Slytherinchica08~ Report Review
I loved it, the snogging scene was so cute! ;D I spent a really good time reading your one-shot, so thanks u a lot!
Gros bisous de France!
(=Kisses from France)Author's Response: Aww, Thanks! It's great that you liked it, I honestly think that it's not one of my better piece's of writing, expecially as I wrote this when I was in like grade 8 ;)
Well, thanks again!
Les gros bisous a vous, aussi!
Not the best at french ;) Report Review
it was good sank. i luv the kissing epic scene rite more romantic comedys! gud job!!Author's Response: :) Why thaank you, shanukha.
When are you going to get your own account??? Report Review
I like the idea for this one shot, it's cute. Occasionally I wasn't sure who it was that was speaking but other than that I thought that it was good :)
Dee, xAuthor's Response: I'm sorry for the late reply, but thank you very much :)
I've been on hpff for a really long time, but just decided to write one myself. Report Review
Hey :) this was a really good first piece :). I think you could make it a little better by including more descriptions instead of just dialouge and adding a bit of context.However, I thought the story line was really cute and the characters were great too :) keep writing xAuthor's Response: Thank you so much. Reading back, I can find so many things I need to fix :) Report Review
OMG, that was hilarious!! Though, A. What makes it time travel-ly? and B. You have the exact same story and AN twice.Author's Response: LOL, thank you. Yeaah, i just realized my mistake, whoops :) I actually meant to write a time travel fic, but somehow it ended up like this ;D Report Review
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