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Review #1, by love_is_magic_ Of Tacos and Firemen

7th March 2014:
Back yet again! This one looks like it promises to be a little bit more cheery! At least, if the title is any indication.

Okay, so I think I was right in deeming this one to be cheerier! Aside from the beginning, that is. You do have a really great way of showing the loss of somebody close to you, especially when it's a life partner. The little bit about her being pregnant was really the straw that broke the camels back for me, though. How heartbreaking. At least she gets a little piece of Marcus, though!

Okay, so there were a few typos, but those are easily fixed by yourself or with the help of a beta if you ever felt like going back and editing.

I really enjoyed reading this one and was so impressed at the diversity you showed in your writing of different genres. This one was definitely a break from your others and was done very well!

Christy

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Review #2, by anythingcouldhappen Of Tacos and Firemen

7th March 2014:
Hi! Reviewing this for Blackout Bingo :)

This was adorable! I mean I can't stand Pansy usually, but here I just found myself laughing at her mishaps! Starting a fire by cooking tacos and holding Alex and trying to do dishes? Well if you're going to start a fire, that's the way to do it I suppose.

And of course, instead of thinking about the damage immediately, she thinks of the cute fireman in front of her. Well why not? He sounded rather dreamy. It makes sense also, because I imagine you might be a little in shock after an incident such as that! It was good though that you had her getting upset a little later, when she had to walk in and see her destroyed kitchen with no food. I like that she was concerned over feeding Alex! And then the end, when Christopher comes--that was great! Made me smile definitely. he best part was when Pansy was thinking maybe the muggle world wasn't so bad. That's kind of completely out of character for her, but considering the nature of this story, it was great!

I think the one thing you might do to improve this is expand the beginning a little. It all goes by kind of quickly.

Great job!

Sam

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Review #3, by luvinpadfoot Of Tacos and Firemen

29th June 2012:
Aw, this was cute. I liked the realism of Pansy and how she mourned for Marcus while moving on. It was very sweet. =) And the taco thing made me laugh!

Author's Response: AWWW Thanks! :) This was the first time i've tried to write anything funny. If you've read my other fics you might have noticed they tend to be darker so this was interesting to write. I'm glad you liked it :)

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