I love it when I totally call stuff :). I love a protagonist that speaks with candor. Report Review
*sings triumphantly* I was ri-ight doo dee doo dee doo doo.
He currently probably only is after her for looks. BUT my question is this; is Tammy a virgin? Report Review
Okay. I was apparently looking into it too much. It's what I do. XD
James is SO in like with Tammy. I mean teasing? Please. Report Review
She could be hideous, or she could be beautiful. The context clues are ambiguous when you REALLY thing about it. Well done. Report Review
good writing, nice story coming along.
looking forward to more Report Review
This is getting good! Keep writing! Report Review
The summary of the story says that Tammy will befriend Lily but this chapter is all about Rose with the title summary " Their first encounter." Should 'Lily' be replaced by 'Rose' in the story summary? Report Review
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