Reading Reviews for Hermione, how it began.
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by anon Not so muggle after all.

28th August 2014:
This is a good story, but aren't both of her parents dentists? I haven't read it for a while, so I could be wrong. Also a couple of grammatical errors, but it's a great storyline to explore.

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Review #2, by iLOVElunaLOVEGOOD Not so muggle after all.

22nd August 2011:
this has a good storyline so far :)

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Review #3, by thewhiteking Not so muggle after all.

14th April 2011:
Really interesting premise and I'm excited to see where it goes. Nicely written too. One thing. If it's the day before her birthday it'll be 364, not 365 days. Because a year is 365 days.

Minor quibble. Otherwise nice.

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