Haha this was really entertaining. :) Great first chapter. The only thing was it was kind of hard to remember which character was which, but that's alright cause as the story goes on, the characters sink in more. And I plan on finishing the story! The reason I came across this story, was because I realized that I stole your tittle "Magic in the air" and I feel really bad for stealing it, so I might change my own tittle! But I'm glad I came across this, cause it's really well done! :) keep it up!Author's Response: I'm so sorry, I just got this review! I'm really glad you like it and if you haven't changed your story title, feel free to continue using the same one; I don't mind at all! I'm so excited you plan on finishing this and feel bad I haven't given an update recently. Summer has started though and I plan on working on this some more and giving it the proper attention it deserves. I hope you'll continue reading and I'm glad that you enjoyed what you're read so far. Report Review
its good so far i love the way you portrayed dom and kyler cant wait for the next chapter Report Review
I love this chapter it's so awesome Report Review
i love this chapter ! Report Review
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