2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Fawkes_the_Pheonix Unexpected News

6th February 2012:
Just a note: you switch between first and third persons at various points
In general I liked the story so far. Keep updating!
-Fawkes

Author's Response: Thank you for telling me! I need to watch out for that in the future!

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Review #2, by Maya Unexpected News

3rd April 2011:
I like it-a good start! Keep going! :) i hope there's lots of drama coming up between james and lily! Until the next update...

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! And yes there will be a lot of drama between James and Lily especially when Sirius has a plan under his sleeve :D

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