Great story so far! How many pen names do you have?! I'd like to check it all out. Report Review
Such an amazing book, please write more like it. Report Review
Any update on the sequel? I have really enjoyed your story so far! Report Review
didn't even see the authors note about it until just after i submitted my review :P i had a feeling right from the first paragraph, then even more when it said the first question then when it said luna had a leather skirt i was like BAM i have a new favourite fanfiction author. that was such a great episode, and this chapter is just as great!! you did a fantastic job redoing the episode yet making it your own! anyways, love your story and i'm glad we have something in common other than harry potter and shipping dramione :) Report Review
this was already one of my favourite stories, but this chapter just made this my #1 favourite fanfic!! (because that was one of my favourite episodes of one tree hill!!!) Report Review
The whole draco and hermione being best friends was really nice but I think possibly a bit far fetched for this story.Author's Response: my apologies... Report Review
I know you wrote this a long time ago so you probably don't keep up with the reviews. However, I just read this and loved every moment of it! Such a sweet story! There were parts that even made me tear up!! I would have loved an epilogue though. Ended so abruptly!Author's Response: thank you so much. I'm sorry i ended it so soon, more than likely i will add an epilogue but i'm currently in the middle of getting ready for law school and i haven't gotten much writing in. Report Review
I aboslutely lOved every second of this story.Author's Response: thank you thank you Report Review
I love this story!
Please post up the next chapterAuthor's Response: I don't have any more chapters, i will be posting the epilogue as soon as i get it finished
Just finished reading the first chapter and I'm hooked! :)Author's Response: thank you... that makes my day to hear that. Report Review
O my god, this story is AMAZING!!! I started reading it yesterday, and I read all the chapters, and it's sooo good!!! Please post a new chapter soon!!! I've read some pretty good stories before, but they mostly ended when graduation took place, and I love how you continued into their lives after Hogwarts. This is such a good story, and I love how amazingly in-love hermione and Draco are! Keep up the good work, and I will keep reviewing, as long as you keep adding to the story, if you are not already done, I will continue reviewing and reading!!!
Love, _Malfoy LUVR_Author's Response: thanks so much, i love a positive review... I've got about six or seven more chapters up my sleeves and am working on a few other stories as well. so i won't leave you with nothing to read. Report Review
I would love if you stopped putting the quotes in italics, no book does that. Italics are usually for thoughts or memories. Other than that, I love the story and the plot, keep up the good work. :)Author's Response: sorry, wasn't aware of that. I will try to do better in the future Report Review
This is really good. I think you should keep going with either more chapters or a whole other bookAuthor's Response: thank you, i have some of both. THere should be about six more chapters, and i'm writing additional stories as well. Just keep checking in! Report Review
Aw, but it'll be okay1 They'll see each other again, I know it! :3Author's Response: true... they will.. Report Review
NO! Harry has to come back! He has to! :-@Author's Response: i promise you he will be back, i wont kill him off, at least not right now. Report Review
omg i cannot believe how good that was please continue you are a fantastic writer and i have loved your story from start to presentAuthor's Response: thank you so much... I've only a few chapters left to go, I'm hoping for 26 total for this story so i'm so pleased to hear you enjoy it... Report Review
great story! :) cant wait to see how it all turns out...Author's Response: thank you very much Report Review
Now, that was a bit dramatic.
Pansy and Neville, never imagined that.
Harry missing at Christmas, doesnt seem right somehow.
Ginny having a change of heart,I feel bad for her now.
chapter well doneAuthor's Response: But i like drama... lol, don't worry they will find him... i like harry can't kill him it would be too OC for me...thank you for your comment... i always love to hear a chapter is well done! Report Review
I loved it as well :) its a very good story, i could'nt stop reading it.. Although i am wandering are you just gonna leave the story to end that way or are you planning on more chapters? I am dying to know.. lolAuthor's Response: definitly not planning to end it here. 26 chapters already written, and my be longer if i can't manage to wrap up my story line in the chapter i'm working on right now.The rest should be coming soon after Christmas. Report Review
this is absolutley great i lovd itAuthor's Response: why thank you... I aim to please :) Report Review
What happens next?! What happens next?! 8-3Author's Response: next chapters up for validation... hopefully it'll be ready for yall by Christmas! Report Review
WoW! I think I'm Blind! I read every word, didn't want to miss a thing. I once had a ms-carriage shortly after I married and while I was packing up the apartment to move into a house. Didn't know, was only a month along,who would? The last thing Hermione should have been doing was unpacking her belongings without help. What was the girl thinking? This late in her pregnancy she could have torn the placenta away from the uterine wall, then creating a blood clot that could push the mucus plug away. Early labor. Wasn't she lucky that Draco was home for a visit?
Good chapter, so, the moment we have all been waiting for, is it a boy or a girl?
Till next chapter!~Author's Response: Wasn't really meaning to put her in danger... And i guess she was lucky, although that wasn't really my intention either, i just couldn't drag out her pregnancy any longer... i'm not a patient person, not even with my own story... i like to get to the point.. Report Review
God I love this story!! and i can not wait for this baby to arrive!!
Fair play to you its really a great story!!
Amazing is what sums it up :):)Author's Response: Thanks, i'm very glad... that's why i write is for people to hopefullly enjoy it as much as i do Report Review
Ugh!!! Too much drama! I loved this novel at the begining and im trying to stick to it. But its to much ive counted a minimun of 4 diferent dilemas. My personal oppinion is to stop bringing more dilemas in to this situation. I mean the heart problem. The ron problem. The draco relationship. The lestrange family. The treats to cathleen. Noel. the pregnancy(its a girl right?). The placenta risks. The kidnaptors. The ginnys decition. (btw when is harry going to propose?!). And now draco leaving. Hope u get my idea and not in a bad way(sorry for the critisism.) Just trying to help u! :)Author's Response: Thanks... sorry. I apolgize for the excess. I didn't mean for it to be overly dramatic. I'm editing as we speak. Thanks for the criticism. I wouldn't have realized otherwise. Report Review
i just want to say i love the whole story, i stayed up all night reading it. great job!(:Author's Response: thank you so much... only a few more chapters to the finish... I'm so glad you like it Report Review
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