Fascinating story- I hope you do continue it!

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Great Story please post again soon

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wow awesome story so far

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This story is getting intense! Please keep it up! Looking forward to reading what happens next. :D

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're enjoying, new chapter to come ASAP

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excellant chapter, I look forward to the next chapter

Author's Response: Why thank you very much!

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Whoa okay good, 'cause I was like, Dean?? Why would he do that? But still, what use could Ginny be? Update soon!

Author's Response: Working on it!

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Ew! Hair in an envelope! Skeevy

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I can't wait until Ron finds out what they've been doing. He's gonna be quite upset. And what in the world, why would someone take Ginny? Update soon!

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Fantastic story - I look forward to more!

I wonder who took Ginny?...

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Please update soon...I love your fanfic! :)

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When Ron founds what happened between Harry and Hermione it's going to get ugly. I'm liking these cliff hangers makes the story more intense. Can;t wait for the next chapter! :)

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awesome!i can't wait for the next chapter!
please update soon!:)

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Interesting chapter looking forward to see how everything unfolds. Have a feeling that Ron is going to buy that Galaxy 3000. :P The end is kinda creepy but a great cliff hanger. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

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oh my gosh what a way to end the chapter, hope you don't too long to update, whole chapter was excellant.

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Such an amazing story!
Im looking forward to the next chapter so much!

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Oh my goodness! I deman an update right this moment! I love this story and you leave me with a cliffy? D: awh! Most amazing sorry ever,you have here, by the way.
Hugs and kisses,
Ever

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Okay, that part about Fred and George- I totally cried. Well done :) And the note was a nice addition as well. But yeah, great writing, and all that jazz. Update soon, I wanna know what Hermione has to say!

Author's Response: Thank you, I took a moment to pay tribute :( Update to come ASAP!

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Harry, Harry, Harry. That's all I have to say. This situation is just so ridiculously messed up.

Author's Response: He's certainly a mess :)

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love this chapter, especially the ending suspense.

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Rather clever of Hermione. I just wonder how she managed to intercept the note!

More updates please! :)

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I'm thoroughly enjoying it so far. For a brief moment, however, I thought you'd be going with the "and Ron and Hermione were living happily ever after...yadda yadda" thing, but, luckily, it's not the case, as far as I can see.

This is an emotional rollercoaster for all four of them and you captured the essence of those emotions very well. Spot on.
What criticism I might have is the relatively short chapters. The essence is there, but still... Also, you have misspelled 'horocrux' quite a few times, it should be 'horcrux'.

It was also a nice flourish to put in Harry's letter as a chapter image. I liked that.

All in all, I'm adding it to my favourites and will be following up on the next chapters. Good job and happy writing,

Zoltan

PS. If you like Harmony THAT much, check out my "Shadowlands" and "To Become Whole Again". I'd love to hear your thoughts.

Author's Response: Thanks very much, I appreciate your comments and suggestions, duly noted. Chapter length is something i've struggled on keeping consistent but in the future I will definitely be more aware of that!
Will definitely check out your stories, thanks again for the review!

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Please pleas please post up soon! Im so excited to see the next chapter!

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OMG it's getting good can't wait for more

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Love this story! If keeps getting better and better. i'm curious to how Hermione is feeling right now and what she is going to tell Harry. And I wonder how Ron is going to feel when he finds out that Hermione hidden his letter from Harry and went to see Harry be herself behind his back. I feel this situation might get worse. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! You'll hear more from Hermione's side in the next chapter but just you wait interesting things are planned :)

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I love this story. Seriously.
This is the first Harry/Hermione I've read on this site, but they were my first favorite fandom couple, and I'm glad I decided to chose your story.
It's very real and believable and I'm excited to read more chapters.
I wonder what Hermione has to say to Harry. I bet it's something important since she didn't show the note to Ron.

Great writing and fabulous story. I love it so far. Keep up the great work!
11/10

Author's Response: Aww thank you for your lovely review! Got only a couple more chapters to go (maybe :) I haven't decided on the ending yet) but thank you for reading through it, I'll do my best to keep it fabulous!

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