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Review #1, by malfoydraco

16th April 2011:

i love the moody emotional Hermione. It's always insanely funny. I also love the chapter! How did you come up with Slaven? Write longer chapters. Bye.
-malfoydraco

Author's Response: I went on some website name generator thingy and Slaven was like the first one to pop up.

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Review #2, by malfoydraco

One month later.

11th April 2011:

awesome Job. Just one thing. LONGER CHAPTERS! I'M TALKING 1,000 WORD ONES! I love how Malfoy doesn't care that it's Ron's kid and proposed!!!
-You_know_me!

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Review #3, by gran/ger

The Day at the Fountain

10th April 2011:

I like it so far; but there's not enough filler. Sometimes the boring whys and therefores are necessary. Still I'm looking forward to what comes next. Sorry to be a bore because your story is looking good so far. I have a tendency to nitpick!

Author's Response: Okay. thanks for informing me. I'll try to make it more filler-y

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Review #4, by malfoydraco

The Day at the Fountain

5th April 2011:

Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter! WRITE LONGER CHAPTERS! They rock so write longer ones. I can't wait to find out what is wrong with 'mione! Bye!
-seventeen_five_nineteen_eleven_one

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Review #5, by malfoydraco

Friends?

4th April 2011:

Really good! I love what 'mione's alarm clock says! Can't wait for the next chapter! Bye!
-malfoydraco

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