i love the moody emotional Hermione. It's always insanely funny. I also love the chapter! How did you come up with Slaven? Write longer chapters. Bye.
-malfoydracoAuthor's Response: I went on some website name generator thingy and Slaven was like the first one to pop up. Report Review
awesome Job. Just one thing. LONGER CHAPTERS! I'M TALKING 1,000 WORD ONES! I love how Malfoy doesn't care that it's Ron's kid and proposed!!!
-You_know_me! Report Review
I like it so far; but there's not enough filler. Sometimes the boring whys and therefores are necessary. Still I'm looking forward to what comes next. Sorry to be a bore because your story is looking good so far. I have a tendency to nitpick!Author's Response: Okay. thanks for informing me. I'll try to make it more filler-y Report Review
Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter! WRITE LONGER CHAPTERS! They rock so write longer ones. I can't wait to find out what is wrong with 'mione! Bye!
-seventeen_five_nineteen_eleven_one Report Review
Really good! I love what 'mione's alarm clock says! Can't wait for the next chapter! Bye!
-malfoydraco Report Review
Terms of Service
categories & genres
short story collection