Love the romance and drama. Keep it
up! :)

Author's Response: thanks :) i will!

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this storys great i cant put it down. i love how this argument between harry and natalie has escalated! love it

Author's Response: awe thank you so much! Im really glad you are enjoying this!

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why was nat such a bitch to cedric? i love him

Author's Response: oh well it's just part of the story. It was a stressful situation and she was on edge. Thanks for the review!

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when is she gunna lose her v card dammit

Author's Response: hahaha well she is only 14 in this story. It's way too early in my opinion for her to lose it. Thanks for the review(:

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Your stories are amazing! I love the first person POV. Your writing is descriptive and entertaining! I just love Natatlie. She is such a complex, round character. I also love that she follows Aristotle's beliefs on tragedies, the main character need to be complex and respectable, but also deeply flawed. If i could sugest one thing on your work it would be the layout of your writing. You need to make it more clear who is saying what. When you add things about another character right after dialogue, it makes it confusing to the reader as to who is speaking. This may not make a lot of sense but I'll try to provide an example using a direct quote from this chapter.

'Your Christmas present.' He turned to me and smiled.

Natalie is speaking in this quote but you make it confusing by putting Draco's reaction right after. This makes it hard to know who is speaking. An easy way to fix this is to make it clear who is speaking:

'Your Christmas present.' I replied. He turned to me and smiled.

By doing this you will make the story a lot less confusing for the reader. Other than that, LOVE LOVE LOVE IT.

Author's Response: Awe thank you so so so much! I will consider that suggestion. Thanks for the review and I hope you keep reading xD

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LOVING THE FANFICTION!

Author's Response: awe thanks so much!! please keep reading and reviewing!! xD

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loved it from start to finish

Author's Response: thank you so much!! you should check out the sequel as well!! xD

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I agree with Harry: Natalie is definitely acting like a bitch most of the time...

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! And I can see what you mean; Nat does some bitchy things. But Harry's also treating her like the scum of the Earth all because of her boyfriend. He's not being a good brother. Keep reading and you'll see a turn of events down the road!

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Nope. It's not over, I refuse to belive that it's over. No way no how. Please hurry with the sequel or I may get incredibly depressed.

Author's Response: xD I'm working on writing the first couple chapters of the sequel, and once I do that it'll be up on the site! Thanks for the review!

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Noo! It's over! But wonderful ending! Brilliant story, I loved it. I can't wait for the sequel, I just know it's gonna be as amazing as this one. Or even better if that's even possible. Spectacular story! :D 10/10!!

Author's Response: Thanks soo much!! I have some incredible ideas for the sequel. Hope you like them!

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wow!
that was an amazing way to put her into all of that :P

Author's Response: Hahahaha thanks!

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I think this chapter was amazing! I loved the amends and the truces, and I loved seeing things from Draco's POV. Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon! :D

Author's Response: Haha thanks! Next one will be up as soon as its written!! xD

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Next one please. I move this story and don't want I to ever end. :)

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I just updated so look for the next chapter in a couple days or so! xD

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“Instead of admiring the thing that brought us to hell, why don’t you try to find a way out of this place?! Isn’t that what you Hufflepuffs are particularly good at?”BAHAHA AVPM REFERENCE!!! Haha I loved this chapter hurry up and update soon!!

Author's Response: I will update as soon as I get the next chapter written but I wanna get Young Black updated first!! Thanks for your review! :D

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Nice chapter. I totally got the reference, but I had to read it once or twice more to get it. XD I think you wrote this really well. You found a perfect way to incorporate Nat into that part of the story without changing too much, which was rather amazing. I'm sad there's only two chapter left, but I can't wait to read them. Update soon please! :)

Author's Response: Haha thanks!! Yah, I couldnt wait to get this chapter written!! I have ideas for the next two as well which will test Harry's promise he made in the previous chapter. I will try and update soon and dont be too sad because there will be a sequel xD

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yay lol i love your stories, and this was a great chapter!

And im NOT just saying that because i wuv you lol

Author's Response: haha thanks girll!! next chapter will be up soon!!

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Amazing as usual!! Hurry up and update! I can't wait to see the end and the sequel especially since I've been such a dedicated reader. You are truley amazing don't let anyone tell you different! :)

Author's Response: awe thanks soo much! That means so much to me!! Thanks for your review!!

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Awww that's so sweet. I can't believe this is nearly finished but at least we still have the sequel to read. Can't wait till the next chapter is uploaded
10/10
~Dramionedrunadrinny

Author's Response: haha thanks!! next will be up ASAP!

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I loved the chapter, as always! I cant wait to see what new drama you come up with next! I hope you update soon.

Author's Response: haha thanks gen! I will


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Haha, that was funny, cause Draco really did sound like a girl! Great chapter. But I can't believe Ron didn't kiss Hermione, I feel so bad for her. Can't wait for the next chapter. Sorry I haven't updated anything, but I'm on it. :D

Author's Response: Awe thanks!! I'm glad u liked it! And its okay, but I cant wait to read more of your stories!! I havent exactly written the next chapter yet, however look out for Life of a Young Black! :D Thanks for reviewing!

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Oh meanie!! You know I don't like cliffhangers :( all well I might forgive you if you hurry up and update!! The last one took forever! Awesome chapter as usual XD

Author's Response: haha sorry, but it seemed like the perfect place to stop!! I will update as soon as i can! I already have the next chapter written but i have to wait for Young Black to update before I can submit it! Keep reading and thanks for the reviews!

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Omg i love ur story its got me addicted plz write more soon

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I loved this chapter, but I wish there was more Draco, but it was still awesome! I unfortunately think Harry will be a jerk again, but I hope he's not. I can't wait for the next chapter to see if Ron and Hermione actually kiss. Great job! :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! There's a little more Draco in the next chapter haha (I have it written)! Although since the end of the book is near, I have to tie up loose ends with the other elements of the story, so there will be less Draco.but hes not gone like Nate! :D Thanks for your review!!

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Great chapter! I think Harry will keep his promise on not being a jerk and I think, since I hate Romione (no offense to anyone) it won't work out very long like Nat and Draco. Please update the next chapter soon :)
10/10
~Dramionedrunadrinny

Author's Response: haha awe im glad u like it!! I will definitely update the next chapter since i already have it wriiten! Thanks for reviewing! :D

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hey brit, its ur awesome cousin! i luved the chapter and i am like glued to the book now. i liked how close natalie and draco are. it really gives the book an extra welcoming feel. i cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: haha thanks cuzzie! love uu!!!

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