Beautiful.

I love how simple this is and yet it's very striking. I loved the repetition of this line in the beginning and the end:

"He'd always loved clementines - so small, so sweet, and so satisfying in their delicate taste."

It tied the whole story together nicely and made it all very poetic. It's such a clever little line that stays with you even after you read it.

Lucius/Narcissa is something like a guilty pleasure for me and this is probably one of the best-written ones I've read by far. I loved how candid this is, and cute, but not horribly cute... it's just perfectly balanced. Lovely, lovely story.

Thank you for this really sweet and wonderful piece!

xtinjsc (Hufflepuff)

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Lucius/Narcissa are my guilty pleasure, I love them so much.

I like clementines too. Funny, I'd never thought my favourite fruit would coincide with one of my favourite couples. But hey, it's a welcomed surprise. Haha.

I absolutely adore every single thing about this, I really do. I love the characters, the way it has been written and all of the lovely little lines that make me feel warm inside.

'He'd always loved clementines - so small, so sweet, and so satisfying in their delicate taste.' That has to be my favourite, I must say. I like its ironic touch.

I really cannot believe, however, that this only has two reviews so far. It makes me want to spam the hell out of it until there's about 149084. But I doubt that's allowed, the nasty TOS and all ;)

But anyway, I'd best stop. I have a tendency to ramble, and that never does anyone any good, haha.

So yes, this is definitely favourited and rated ten out of ten :)

Allie x.

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I don't think I've ever found citrus sexy before... but oh my! I love Lucius/Narcissa so much, and this was fantastic.

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Really really enjoyed this :) please write more? 10/10 xx

~Annabella~

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