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Review #1, by lovelyluckyladyleo The World Never Stops

30th March 2011:
OoO Intrigue. Just what I like in a story. Definitely favourited. can't wait to read more.

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Review #2, by Aderyn The World Never Stops

29th March 2011:
This is quite an interesting start! I can't wait to read what happens next. I think you've set up a wonderful start to this mystery: definitely creepy. Your descriptions seemed to be appropriate in both length and placement.

Though this is, I guess, the prologue I feel like you could have extended this to be a bit longer. The part with Aysha or the detective could have been drawn out. Or another scene could have been added.

But all that aside, great job!!

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Review #3, by dosyjenks The World Never Stops

29th March 2011:
great first chapter, im hooked! please update soon :) x

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