OoO Intrigue. Just what I like in a story. Definitely favourited. can't wait to read more. Report Review
This is quite an interesting start! I can't wait to read what happens next. I think you've set up a wonderful start to this mystery: definitely creepy. Your descriptions seemed to be appropriate in both length and placement. Though this is, I guess, the prologue I feel like you could have extended this to be a bit longer. The part with Aysha or the detective could have been drawn out. Or another scene could have been added. But all that aside, great job!! Report Review
great first chapter, im hooked! please update soon :) x Report Review
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