Oh my gosh your unfinished stories are killing me!!!

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Best. Story. Ever!
PLEASE UPDATE!

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OK. just wow. WOWOWOWOW. first of all, i thought it was really smart of you to do the whole five-years-later. and to make aisha a total badass. I mean, she's a healer. and a lawyer. Shes a hawyer. that's pretty damn awesome. you HAVE to update. PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE.

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i like it. very much so. then again i love all your stories, so i suppose this shouldn't surprise me. this is ma first louis/OC, so you should consider yourself honoured, ma friend
HONOURED!
great story:)

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please .. please .. please update!

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NO!!! More more more more more more more more more!

*wink* Sarahxox

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oh. sadness :(
louis is adorable with the kids!!! how in the world did victoire have 8 kids in under 5 yrs? plus 2 on the way???

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aaawww i love aisha :)

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hee hee. im excited for him to get paid back :)

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oy. that was really sad :(

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rose. is. awesome!!! can we get more of the rest of the family?

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i feel bad for aisha :(

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aaawww teddy and tori :) cute!

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i still like him, even though he is obnoxious...

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I LOVE LOUIS ;) lol :)

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she seems really cute :)

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i love rose's character!

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im confused what year everyone is in...

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Interesting story :) I loved getting to see Louis with the kids in this chapter - so adorable! Although I have to say, 10 kids!!(I come from family with 5 kids, and I've got to say, the chaos would be unbelievable!) But Louis is adorable - and it's nice to see him more mature than he was before.

Love Aisha too - though bringing wine and then being super formal ... she's sending mixed signals (mixed feelings?). Anyway, can't wait to see how this plays out :)

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I loved this chapter! This is a great way to start a story. It's hilarious; I was literally laughing aloud. I'm excited to read on!

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I love, love LOVE this story!!!
Especially Victoire's kids :]
i hope there's more from them
xx

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Well first off I must say that I am in tears right now because I was laughing so hard and my side hurts alot.
Secondly, I adore this story. I adore the humor, the writing the characters the plot etc. etc. etc. etc.
I don't really have much else to say besides, that I love this story.
Also, how in gods name did victoire have 8 kids in 5 years?
Love, Me

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what can I say? brilliant as always dream_BIG...I love all your stories (well, the next generation ones that is)...Louis is awesome and beast-like :)

I very much agree on the whole 'can't write like a guy cuz you're a girl' issue...except I have no guy friends whatsoever (maybe one but he's so bloody annoying...lol I sounded British)...anyway...lost my train of thought...darn

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I want Louis to be my new best friend.
And Al. I love Al too.
Life would be so much more awesome, interesting and fun with those two as your besties.
Anyway, my favourite chapter, me thinks.
:D ~Sophh.

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HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I love Victoire's kids! Although bloody... is right! 10?!?!?!?! WHAT?!?!?!
I truly love when Leah explains how she figured out what a 'hottie' was. XD LOVE IT!

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