I love Mumford & Sons and this is one of my favorite songs of theirs :) I like Lee/Alicia because I've never read it before, so it was good to see something different. At first, I was a little wary of characters quoting the song in dialogue, but I warmed up to it toward the end. Over all, nice one-shot! :) Report Review
I love George and Angie the most. Because I'm a Georgelina shipper, LOL. But Lee and Alicia are great as well.
I personally don't like Angelina being pregnant because she's my favorite character so I like to protect her honor, LOL, but I don't think it's necessarily far fetched.
To improve your writing you can put page breaks in to make it that much easier to follow and maybe add some detail just to fill it up.
I enjoyed the story very much. I love that it was from Lee's point of view. I've never read a fandic from his POV before, so it was interesting. I didn't want this to end. Great job!Author's Response: THANKYOU!!
I love Georgelina and personaly i don't think there are enough stories about them. I'm trying to write a longer one based almost entierly on them but it might not go any where! The reason i picked Lee was i just thought he fitted it, he seems to be left out a bit in the books so i thought people needed to be reminded of his part and how he must be hurting to!
My favourite charecters are all ones with small parts. I love Lee, Alicia, Fred, George and Angelina in the HP gen, my favourite Next gen is James Potter and his friends because theres lots of opotunitys, and i ador Remus because he seems to be slightly neglected.
I'm working on the detail in my stories so thanks!
Thank you again! I'm so glad you decided to read my story and review!!
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I love this. It was awesome. I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you do continue to write. Also, to answer your question, George/Angelina is one of my favourite parings. Haha. To improve your writing, maybe some more description? I love description. It always helps. Anyway, have a good day! - SexyDoorFramesAuthor's Response: Thank you! It's nice to hear from another George/Angelina fan!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I'll try add more descriptions in my other stories and that, To be honest I'm relived someone else has read this i thought it would be lying here forever with one review! Thanks again!
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I know! I love those pairings! :) I hadn't thought of how maybe Angelina might be pregnant with Georges kid during that, I had always thought her and Fred were together til the end there. But it's definitely possible :)
I thought you did a good job incorporating the song in there. I hadn't seen it done that way before :)
Yeah there were a few misspellings, like using 'their' when it should be 'There'
things like that. Otherwise though, I really liked it :)
Great job!Author's Response: aww thankss! ! ! !
yeah i was listening to the song and i just had an urge to write about it! So the mother part i thought should be Angie, but yeah there is a possibility that Fred and Angie never went out at all (excluding the yule ball) so i was experimenting.
I just Love the pairing cause there are soo many possibilitys!
So i like experimenting with it!
Thanks soo much for reading and reviewing!!
And i'm so glad you liked it!
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