Severus will be livid! The muggles saw them fly away before the invisibility button worked. They are all in deep trouble from everyone.

If they don't get expelled, it will be a miracle.

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Lockhart is an idiot and a liar. He has not learned all his skills, he has stolen some of them. Severus and Harry will learn quick enough how useless Lockhart is.

You are making life for Dante even more regrettable with this secret he has to bear alone. He needs help from Severus. He would know how to deal with Death Eaters.

Helping Dante fit in and feel part of a family is going to be difficult. I don't envy the task you have set before you. Good Luck.

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My gosh! Severus is going to blame Dante for not being there and it wasn't his fault. What does this man want?
It's too bad he does not know how to use his wand.
Another cliff hanger! You really like to keep me on the edge of my seat.
I appreciate the update and I really love this story, but I also am excited about 'Unveiled'. these 2 stories have kept me entertained the most. Thank you.

Author's Response: Uh, you'll find out. But maybe not just yet. You're welcome and a new chappie of UnVeiled was posted just before this!

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Please Please update this story!
Can't wait to know what happens next!

I like un-veiled, but please this one too?
*puppy eyes*

Author's Response: Working on the next chapter now.

I'm posting faster to UnVeiled because that's mostly already written and I just have to post each chapter, while Common Interests is posted all up to the chapter I'm currently writing.

Thanks for reading and I'll try to write faster.

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Love the story, but thought I should mention that Dumbledore is gay. Jo said so herself.

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This American wizard is really snobbish and most disrespectful. He puts up a big front, but he is scared and feels alone. I hope you have a way of cutting thru this facade he puts up and really showing his true personality.
But, in the meantime, it will be a difficult transition. Harry will be closest to the problems. Hopefully, he can shed some light on this boy's needs.

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I expect Severus might let it slide because they are meeting for the first time. Dante Prince seems like a spoiled rich kid, but it could all be an act because he is scared.
Will have to see how things go before I decide if I like him or not.

Author's Response: You're right. And there's more to Dante than what he seems, as you'll see.

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Oh wow! The revenge was definitely bitter sweet.
Severus really did put the spell on the Dursley house hold.
Will the spell stay with them when they move away to a different lifestyle?
What is part 2? Are you going to end this one and start a new story? Really am enjoying this one.

Thank you for your beautiful writing. I love it when Severus and Harry are family.

Author's Response: No,part 2 is part of this story, so have no fear. It won't end anytime soon. The spell may or may not follow them as they move.

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This chapter feels like a review before Valentine's Day arrives. All the partners are coming together.

Visiting Petunia is always a joy to watch. Just having Severus present in the Dursley house is a media event. Anything you choose to do to them would be just desserts. thank you for the update. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! And you are so right!

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Dumbledore sure has a suspicious mind. He does not give Severus credit for anything.

I am glad that Severus and Harry are family now.
I would hate to tangle with Severus when he is mad.
The Dursleys are in for it for sure.
Good chapter. So glad to see an update. Thank you,

Author's Response: Yes, you're right. Thanks for reading!

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That was really beautiful. I am so glad that James admitted his faults to Severus. It was good to see Lily and James if only for a short time.
I could imagine Severus and Harry hugging each other. Too sweet for words. good job!

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I loved the chapter
the ending was sweet

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I really liked this chapter. I hope you are feeling better. I love that Sev is going to adopt Harry.

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LOVE this chapter Snapegirl! Finally Harry & Snape are opening up to each other. Finally Harry has had some positive feedback from adults and is florishing within it.

Sorry to hear you've been unwell, I hope you are without residual ill effects and are on the way to better health!!

-- Lauraf68

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How are you? my prayers are with you. take care.

Author's Response: I had a bleed on my brain due to high blood pressure and a mini stroke and also was diagnosed with diabetes. I am home now and on meds and seeing doctors and doing some tests.

I did write a new chapter for Stormcaller but can't post here. You can read it on fanfiction . net

Thanks!

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are you OK? When are you going to update this story?
it is very good and I love reading it. Please don't abandon it. Take care.

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Sorry I missed you're update until now. I think Ghost is right, I think it would be good for Sev to adopt Harry, I think it could help him heal his emotional wounds. I thought Ghosts' discussion with Harry did good too.

Hope your eyesight improves too. Happy Writing! - Lauraf68

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Actually Bran is the Welsh word for crow the Welsh word for raven is gigfran (I'm Welsh ok that's how i know the Welsh word for raven)

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Perfect chapter. I think that sev should adopt harry. Another great chapter can't wait for the next one.

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Belated Happy Thanksgiving to you too! :)

Sev should definitely adopt Harry. They need each other in a more permanent way.

I am sorry to hear about your diagnosis and wish you a speedy recovery back to normal (or as normal as it can be).

I think you are a brilliant writer! I have read or am currently reading all of your stories and am enjoying every one!! I'm sorry I have not commented much, but I normally read on my iPod and putting up comments on that is more tedious than typing on my computer.

I hope you continue to write for a long time!! I especially enjoy the way you show us a different side of Snape. I always felt there was more to him then the books revealed, and you have a wonderful way of bringing it out. :)

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yes, I think Severus should adopt Harry and I hope he accepts. they both need each other.

Sorry to hear about your diabetes type 2? with medicine and diet and exercise, you should do just fine.

thank you so much for the update. I was concerned.

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yes i think Sev should adopt Harry

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Thanks so much for updating! Feel better soon!

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So sorry that the weather has you down. I enjoyed this chapter. Love the idea of Ghost teaching Harry how to calm his spirit and travel to peaceful places.
We have a cliff hanger. Most of Harry's life is made up of worry and stress. If his sleep walking is because of stress, then he is in for a difficult time. Thank you for the update.

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Hello, GREAT chapter---bit mean leaving us with a cliffhanger like that---LOL!! Very interesting dream, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens & what Ghosts' interpretation of the dream may be.

Sorry to hear about the AWFUL weather you've had in Jersey, New York, and others. You've all been in my thoughts & prayers.

Come join us in Oregon, we've had unseasonally decent weather. Bit of rain, bit of wind. Thankfully only made mess of leaves & limbs. Nothing like what you've had to deal with.

Take care and Happy Writing!! -Lauraf68

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