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Review #1, by orderofthephoenix Malfoy's Big Mistake

8th April 2011:
First of all, congrats for third place :D

You've done a brilliant job with this. It was very enjoyable to read. It was realistic and definitely something I can see Draco thinking of doing, especially to Hermione.

It was a great idea to have the prank fail and instead be played on Draco himself. I didn't see that coming!

Well done!

-Sophia x

Author's Response: Thank You for the Congrats. I'm glad you liked it.

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Review #2, by Ali4077 Malfoy's Big Mistake

8th April 2011:
Hello :) It's me WolfieAli from the forums incase my name on here is confusing you :D

I really liked the concept of this. I love how you used Hermione as the intended victim as well. I personally cannot stand Dramiones as it's meant to be a hate/hate thing which you captured perfectly in this :D You really got the sense that Draco absolutely despises the girl.

I love how the prank went horribly wrong too and the joke ended up on him. That was something I wasn't expecting actually but then I probably should have seen it coming. It made the whole situation funnier as it did go wrong and I couldn't help but have a giggle :D

The actual prank itself was a really good idea. I love how you explained it, it was his hair and not hers that had accidentally fallen to the floor.

Just a quick point, when he's snapping out of the daydream is he supposed to hear "Malloy" and not "Malfoy" or is that a typo?

I had fun reading it, good job! x

Author's Response: Thanks for placing in the contest :), I was so excited to hear I got 3rd place!!!
Yes, HA HA it's supposed to be malfoy. you caught me and my typo's, LOL. I'm glad that you liked it. I'm not a Dramione fan either, BLECH!!! Just isn't right if you ask me. So this was a great opportunity for me to actually write about the 2 of them in their true settings and feelings for one another. As soon as I got this assignment mudblood was all that kept going through my mind and how Draco would want everyonw to know that's what she is so that is how it was born... LOL Thanks for the great review, and the opportunity of being in your challenge.


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Review #3, by Nora_Weasley Malfoy's Big Mistake

7th April 2011:
HAH! That's what you get, Malfoy! Sweet Merlin, CEO of Douchebags, Inc. much? This was priceless. Great story :)
~~Nora_Weasley

Author's Response: LOL, Thanks I'm glad that you liked it!!!

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