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Review #1, by Jenna822 The Art of Our Sweet Desires

6th April 2011:
Hey, sorry it took me so long, but I finally made it here. :) I've never read either of these characters before so it'll be interesting.

Aha, I let out a giggle at Seamus being in the wrong bed. Poor guy, that must've been really embarrassing. I think the whole story was cute - in a good way I mean. He seemed confused and bothered a little and was trying to rationalize things in his mind, so it was very realistic. I like how you tied it into events in the book so that it didn't just feel like an addition, but rather an extension of the stories we already know. I like the way the beans kept coming into play. And you didn't “girly” up Seamus either. By having him not know the specific smell and such, you kept him in character. For the first time at it, I think this was very well done. :) --Jenna

Author's Response: Hello! It doesn't matter :)
I thought I should ask you seeing as you are the reason I am now obsessed with Slash. It was your Remus/Regulus!

I tried so hard to make them in character even though you don't see them a lot in the books. We are given a fairly good idea of what they are like.

It wouldn't have been so stiched into canon if Notreallyblond had reminded me Dean had gone out with Ginny and I shouldn't forget that. So I was working with that advice.

Thank you, I didn't really think either character could be overly lustful so I made it cute. Your comments are so nice, seriously made me smile. :D

Thank You ever so much and you know who i'll be calling if I write another!

Ginny45/RandomRed xxx


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