Wow! I thought that this oneshot was really well written! I enjoyed reading from both Ginny and Tom's povs and I thought that reading from both did seem to add to the story. I think that your win was deserved as this did a wonderful job of tying in the lyrics to the story. I loved how you set this up as well, Ginny upset because she knew that Harry was embarrassed by that Valentine she sent which caused her to turn to the diary because she knew that he would listen to her. Your description in this was wonderful as well and I also really enjoyed your Tom Riddle! I think that you did a wonderful job with keeping him canon and ruthless. This was a very enjoyable oneshot to read and I'm glad that the random story button brought me here as I would have never found this on my own! I couldn't find anything that needed to be improved on or fixed so wonderful job on that! Great Job!
~Slytherinchica08~ Report Review
Wow! This was amazing! I love Phantom of the Opera, and you captured it's essence perfectly. The seductive almost dreamlike state in which Ginny slowly falls into the embrace of Tom Riddle's slimy words. This really shows what the little girl went through. Very well done! 10/10Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I really enjoyed writing this one. Report Review
This story is really delicately handled and so original! A fantastic idea and a really good job.Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked it! I've always wondered exactly what went on with Ginny and Tom Riddle. Many fanfic authors have dealt with it in a lot of ways, but this was my interpretation. Report Review
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