...It was OK... I'd suggest better grammar, though. ;) I like the idea of a new house... I was just thinking yesturday of doing something like that... Report Review
no details AND ALOT OFMISSPELLED WORDSAuthor's Response: sorry its not up to youre expectatins but i think it is awesome so you cant judge me on spelling and i put a lot of description in it . Report Review
Not bad. Grammar isn't the best it could be, but a good concept. Keep going!Author's Response: thanks I'll ceep on trying with the spelling's Report Review
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