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Review #1, by schoenberg12 Taste of Salt

29th May 2011:
so good! so detailed!

saw one typo :
He finished as Helena span(spun) around, her simple blue dress billowing around her.

but so good! what a unique take on the story

Author's Response: Oops! I'll change that :) Thanks for pointing it out :D

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Review #2, by MidnightBlue_x Taste of Salt

18th April 2011:
Hello There, I'm ElysiumJayne from the forums.

First of all thank you for entering my challenge! Secondly, I'm a bit of a history nut myself so when I saw Helena Ravenclaw as your main character I was sort of dancing a little with excitement. Your given quote fits in quite perfectly with the storyline and I found myself really enjoying what I was reading.

So thank you again for entering my challenge

x Ely

Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed it :) Thanks for giving me such an interesting prompt! :L

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Review #3, by katti4493 Taste of Salt

19th March 2011:
I really liked this. It stuck with the time period well - not just with the general plot and the reason that the Baron killed Helena, but the language and the way, especially Helena spoke. I felt the Baron's language was a little flamboyant, but that just reflected the character you had made for him, so I could see it was a good decision!!! I also really liked the descriptions of Helena at the beginning, you could clearly see how much the Baron loved/lusted/obsessed over her. Have you ever considered writing a Founders fic? Cos maybe you should as this was brilliant! Anyway, I'm rambling now, and as you can guess, I thought it was amazing!

Author's Response: Thank you for such a lovely review! :) A Founder's fic isn't in the works, but I'm not saying no :) I'm really glad you enjoyed reading this and thanks once again for the review :D

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