This the third time I'm reading this; I'm not sure why I didn't leave a review before. Better late than never though.
I LOVE this story. It has to be my absolute favourite. You've made the characters completely believable. Also, I love pace of the whole storyline. It's not too rushed, but not slow either.
And erm, yeah. I just bought Atonement recently. Can't wait to read it. (Too bad I don't have Draco to read to me)
Bravo! I hope you succeed in your dreams to become an author. :DAuthor's Response: Oh my goodness, thank you! It's an absolutely incredible book, I really hope you enjoy it. Thank you so much, really, this is such a lovely review, :D Report Review
Cool. Reminds me of my cousins baby.Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying! Report Review
I really love this storyAuthor's Response: Thank you much! Report Review
Aw reading this book never fails to please me. Iv loved this book for years and i decided to re-read it. Please please finish this amazing book it deserves to be finished.Author's Response: It is finished! Thank you so much, :) Report Review
This chapter was just wonderful and really cute.Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
OHMYPRINCESSCELESTIA I LOVE THIS!!! Probably the BEST fanfiction I have read. I absolutely love Dramione because of fanfictions like this. Thank you. c:Author's Response: Awh, thank you! You're too sweet, :D Report Review
Omg omg ur book is absolutly awsome!! U so hav 2 update soon i need to know how da rest of the play n night goes also i would love if this book got finished because its absolutly amazing.:)))Author's Response: It is finished. I ended it where it all began: with Atonement. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thank you! Report Review
Awww, I loved this story so much I simply had to review, I'm not really sure what to say other than the fact that I have loved reading this over the past week and I think you did a spectacular job, you're a great writer and I love the way literature brought Draco and Hermione together! XxAuthor's Response: Thank you so, so much! This review is just lovely, :D Report Review
Oh my goodness, everything in this story was to die for. Seriously, from start to finish, it was flawless. It is, in all honesty, a lovely story.Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you so much! This is such a wonderful review--you've totally made my day, :D Thank you! Report Review
crap, lol! i meant to say im loving your *story so far! wee so good :]Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
absolutely loving your so far! going to finish tonight or tomorrow. when i can lol! i love how you wrote narcissa being charming & sweet to hermione. i've always pictured 'cissa' to be that way since she has different view points on things other then lucius. :]Author's Response: Yeah, I had a lot of fun writing Narcissa. She's my second favorite Black sister (Andromeda being the first), and so I really wanted to let her shine.
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, and thank you! Report Review
Absolutly a beautiful story. You're writing is just amazingly wonderful. At times things got a bit confusing but still a great story!Author's Response: Thank you so very much! :D Report Review
I love your stories and I like your writing style. So when I read your AN I really wanted to read your books. Do you mind sending me the information?Author's Response: Hey, sorry this took me so long to respond to! I haven't been on here in ages.
Well, the books still aren't published, and I've just recently started rewriting the first one AGAIN, but, if you want to follow their progress, I'm over on livejournal and tumblr, both at "ladydrelifoxna", and there's little snippets and the such so you can get a taste for what they're all about.
Other than that, thank you so much! Report Review
WOW. I know it's cheesy, but literally took my breath away. Amazing writing!Author's Response: I love cheesy, :D Thank you so very, very much! Report Review
Wow, this is crazy!! I'm on the edge of my seat! So good, you should consider writing a book of your own!Author's Response: I have! I'm in the middle of the third book in my series. None of them are published, but I hope to be one day. I've sent the first one out a few times, but I keep changing it, so I'm in a standstill until I can finish the first trilogy.
Anyway, enough of my rambling, thank so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
Brilliant so far, I mean really extraordinary!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
Thank you, so much for writing this. Best FanFic I've ever read...ever. And the fact that it revolves around Atonement... gah. Beautiful story, Hermione and Draco are portrayed exactly as I would've imagined them. I love the beginning chapters when they first start reading together, and this last one. Wrapped up the story beautifully! Thank you thank you thank you for creating this!Author's Response: Oh, thank you! This is just the greatest review ever, :D I just want to pin it up on my wall. Thank you, thank you! Report Review
I'm kind of new here but I'm glad that it was your fanfic I encountered first. You had me falling of my seat reading this. It's brilliant!Author's Response: Awh, I'm so happy! :D Thank you so very much! Report Review
This is really good although I must say would be challenging for younger readers (its fine with me though ) that is all xAuthor's Response: Yeah, it is written for mostly older readers, especially with some of the material covered. Thank you! Report Review
OMG I loved it! Sitting here in tears at times, but I loved it! I read it all in about 3 hours, so amazing!Author's Response: Wow, that's pretty intense. I'm glad you liked it so much; thank you for reading! Report Review
Loved it. :) Very good and I am excited to read more. It got me hooked.Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it, thank you! Report Review
your story was actually the first story i read on here, and i just "re-found" it!! I'm actually really happy about it!! I loved it really much!! U r such a good writer!! xxxAuthor's Response: Oh, well I'm so glad! I always love to hear that people started off with this story (as that seems to be the case, for some reason). Thank you very much! :D Report Review
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS! This fanfic is unlike anything I have ever read, and I truly thank you for sharing this great work with all of us here on HPFF! The formatting was amazingly done, the dates and such kept me certain of the timeline, which some fanfics do not, however great they may be. I loved reading this, I actually stayed up until 4am (much to my husband's displeasure!) to read this amazing story that you have created, you have inspired me to write my own Dramione fanfic, which hopefully the first chapter will be up soon! thank you once again for sharing this amazing masterpiece, I hope more is to come from you!
Kateself21Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! This review has made me smile, :D I actually took a lot of time to make it as believable as possible, especially with the dates. I frequently had a calendar and guide marking events in the books up, haha. Thank you, thank you. I am so happy to hear that I have inspired, and I'm so glad you enjoyed this so much. Thank you very, very much! Report Review
your story is amazingAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
This story was fantastic! You took it so much farther than most people usually do with dramione's and it is all that much better for it. I love that you managed to keep the same next generation kids we already know and love while having hermione end up with Draco. Brilliantly done! Loved it!Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you enjoyed that! I was worried, at first, about going so far, but it seems to have worked out. Thank you very much! Report Review
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