Can't wait to see what happens next!! Keep writing!!Author's Response: awww thank you so much!! i will! :D Report Review
Please keep going! I really like this story and you ned to keep going because it is amazing!Author's Response: thank you so much ;D I promise I WILL NOT leave this story unfinished!! I'm really glad you like it! you've just made my day!
Loredana (DK) Report Review
I luv d story and the Cinderella angle.James is going to be the knight in shining armor isn't he and the two trolls Kelly and Kait will be so jealous!!Author's Response: thanx i hope i pull it off but youll have to read the next chapter to find out all the little details enjoy ;P Report Review
wow. i loved this it was really cool.
its intresting and starnge, your character is realy well protrayed. :)
i have a suggestion though.
GIve her a tatto, like something like angel wings, (since she sweet.) and her back.
Pretend that she got in her villa one day, and her evil mother doesn't noe about no one does only she does.
that would totally awesome and plus it would give your character innocence and strangth, something im sure she has pleanty of :)
Love the story anyways, please update :)Author's Response: Thanks i might take you up on the tatto thing Ele seems a bit weak and i was looking for a way to make her more defiant and well strong... thanks alot
Lor Report Review
Wow,it's different nd I love it!
It's reallly good, it's sorta like Cinderella but with a twist,I love it!
Please update!!Author's Response: Thank you soo very much
I never really thought of Cinderella but yeah i guess it is, thats pretty cool!!!
You are officially my faverite writer because you and the first and only (so far i hope) to review my story!!!
and i am at the moment writing the next chapter for you so when it gets validated and posted enjoy!!!
ps this is the chapter she meets James! im so exited Report Review
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