Awwe! i love it! it's so sad, but its so sweet! poor Draco, stuck with Asteria forever XP Report Review
I had to read the story a couple times before I 100% knew what was going on. Here's my understanding: Scorpius Malfoy falls in love with Lily Potter who is the cousin of Rose Weasely who is the daughter of Hermione Granger and Draco Malfoy.
*face in hands* That's so messed up. Why do I love it so much?
Anyway, I really liked it: the dialogue between Draco and Hermione, the details about their history that you slipped in, the overall uniqueness of the story. I thought at some points it was a little cliche, but I mean that in the best way possible. Great job!Author's Response: I'm sorry that it seemed to be difficult to grasp!:/ I tried to kind of clarify without clarifying in the dialogue between Hermione and Draco. I'm glad you liked it because I completely enjoyed writing it. I'm not usually a fan of Dramione (I used to be, but now am more of a fan of Draco/Ginny ships), but I thought this fit together pretty well. I agree that parts are a bit... cheesy. But this was from about a year or two ago, so blame it on my youth:) Thank you so much for the review! Report Review
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