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Review #1, by Bec Miss you

4th September 2011:
Ah-ma-zing ! You're such a talented writer. I think, if you need a characters name, use mine ;) heheh I joke ! Love you !

Author's Response: BEC!!! Thank you so much for reading this and I'm so happy you liked it hehe! I will definitely use your name next time hehe ;) Love you too gorgeous! xx

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Review #2, by TenthWeasley Miss you

14th March 2011:
Ohhh, Shelbs.


You're so amazing, you know that? SO AMAZING. I mean it! It was an absolute pleasure to beta this fic, and I wouldn't say that if it wasn't true. You know how much I love this story - it's so beautiful and tragic and heartbreaking, and poetic as anything! You've outdone yourself here, lovely.

I love you SO much, and I miss you with all my heart! Hope to hear lots and lots from you soon! ^^

Author's Response: *squishes*

*blushes* Oh always make me so happy! Thank you for being the best beta in the world! You deserve every mention I gave you and THEN SOME! I'm SO happy you like it this much hehe, means so much!

Love you! I couldn't do this without you ^_^ Miss you sweetie

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Review #3, by AquariaJasmyne Miss you

13th March 2011:

You write brilliantly, you know that? Seriously, you have written this fic is such a way that I could picture everything. I was so engrossed!!! Your description is amazing. Everything was so clear - it was as though I was right there the whole time!

This whole thing was breath taking. I love reading about minor characters, even more so when they are Slytherins, and you just show another side to someone who is not mentioned too often. You've established him as a really memorable character now, and that is quite a powerful thing to do, twinny.

I loved reading about the thoughts going through his head. I could really feel just how lost he felt, how desperate he was to forget. For a touchy subject, I thought you spoke about him drinking rather well I didn't question it at all, and it totally fit in with this.

The ending was so sad! Seriously, it was so delicately and beautifully written. I loved it! And it was quite chilling, too, which I adore! Also, it wasn't something I'd seen coming, even when I first read it. And, I have already said it, BUT IT WAS SO SAD!!! :'(

Simply an amazing story, Shelby the Hippogriff!! You are such a talented writer, darling! ♥ LOVE YOU!!! Adding this to my faves ;)

-Lizzie the Ferret xoxox

Author's Response: To date...THE.BEST.REVIEW.I'VE.EVER.GOTTEN!

Liz my wittle Ferret...twinny! Why are you so amazing? This review has made my night and has given me the motivation to finish this essay so I can actually WRITE HPFF! You have absolutely NO IDEA how MUCH this means to me!

I'm a good writer?! Now...that's something I wouldn't ever have thought. I'm so happy you think so ^_^

I love that you like this story :) AH! Everything you said, I ADORE! No words can explain how happy I am right now *tear* THANK YOU SO MUCH TWINNY! I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'D DO WITHOUT YOU!

Thank you for motivation.
Thank you for inspiring me.
Thank you for making me feel better about myself.
Thank you for being always!

Lots and lots of love!
- Love your other half, Twin and Hippogriff, Shelby xoxo

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Review #4, by LadyMalfoy23 Miss you

12th March 2011:
Hello! :) Congrats on third place in this fic love!! :)

Anyways i really loved this for two specific reasons, It was a probable yet different side you see to an average slytherin. Adrian was so emotional and handled so well as an average hurt drunk. And i loved the ending. Sadly sad endings are just my thing! I loved that she was dead. .. not that i loved her dead but it just added so much depth to your story. It flowed right from one point straight into the next! Congrats on such an amazing one shot!!


Author's Response: Thank you so much Jess! It was fun to write, even when crying writing the end ^_^

Love you *huggles*

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