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Review #1, by morningstarroost

25th April 2011:

wow. just wow. the imagery is fantastic. i could almost hear the music playing during pansy and dracos stuff.

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Review #2, by LadyMalfoy23

A Scene

6th March 2011:

Wow. . . I'm not sure how to even chatagorize this kind of writing hun. It is great though. . . Such a moving piece of work. It seems to capture a part of the future Draco that you will never know. Poor poor pansy. I truly love how you put her in this, along with Astoria. . . It was so vivid and descriptive, so deep and powerful. You put so much raw emotion into this story.

I did however notice one spelling mistake where you wrote i instead i think you meant to write in cant seem to find it when i went back to look though :( sorry.

All in all a great story with a marvelous plot line set in the fairy taleish era (if that makes sense) I loved it so much.

Xx Jess

Operation: Green with Envy.

Author's Response: Thanks Jess! I categorize it as half-asleep rambling, but I figured there was half an ounce of merit in it so I'd better post it or else I'd just stare at it for a while, trying to fix something. I'm glad you liked it, as once I was awake, it only made the vaguest sense to me!

I'm sure I'll find it, typos are my enemy.

Thanks hon! I appreciate that :]

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