This is a nice start to what seems to be a humorous story, but I highly suggest rereading through your story to find spelling mistakes. There are a lot with punctuation and can be a real turn off for a reader. I would also enjoy it if you developed the other sisters more in the future. My favorite line was about using a smart word. Thank you for writing and hope to see more from you soon -DD Report Review
hey there babe. do you want me to be your beta reader ? send me the things to angelaaa.hpff@hotmail[dot]com btw good work but chyeahh i'm on the phone with you so that works. kthanksbye.Author's Response: :L sure thing aye, i'll add you :) thanks hun. Report Review
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