Luna I LOVE your books! I'm only a beginner when it comes to fan fictions, but your books were the first ones that I read, and I love this one the most! I've learned a lot from you, and I hope that you keep writing. You have such a talent, and I really look up to you. Thank you so much!

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You! This. Wow.
This is the best fanfiction I have ever read, I'm seriously lost for words. I made an account just so I could write a review of your story.You are an incredible writer with a wild imagination, the story just had so many twists, I loved it! Are you planning on writing any more, if so I can't wait to read them! I also read your other stories which are also great but I feel this one is the best, it had me on edge. Thank you so much for writing this, it was AMAZING!
P.s never give up writing, it's going to get you far in life.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked my story so much!! Yeah, the truth is that this was the one story I devoted most of my time to. Never Alone had the potential to be a good story as well, but my life has become so hectic that I just don't have time anymore, so for now I have given up on writing :(. Hopefully, though when my life stops being so hectic I'll be able to continue my ongoing stories and create new ones. Meanwhile again thanks for your kind words and for enjoying my story so much!
P.S. Welcome to HPFF!!!
Lana

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very good story and narration.. keep it up :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! :)
Lana

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OH MY LORD ASSFJGJKKERUIELEODNSNAKDHDJHDANSJ
Let me just say this story you have written is amazing. like seriously, i can't wait until i can carry on reading it. there are so many twists and drama and tension, sometimes i have to stop reading just to let everything sink in.
i wasn't planning on reviewing until after i'd finnished but then i read this chapter and i just had to. at first i always thought it was artemis that was the traitor, and then ginny suggested her and i was like yeah i got it right! and then hermione got accused and harry "believed" it and i thought, oh lana thats a bit out of character...but then it was all okay! well as okay as it could be for a family on the run but anyway.. then i was a bit stumped over who the traitor could have been and then i read this chapter and POW! MATTHIAS!?!?!?!?!? i never saw that coming, i thought he was so nice! but it all made sense in the end. and then i started thinking well didnt it say that someone had died? and i was going through matthias or harry? matthias or harry? and i was hoping it'd be matthias because then he could have died a noble death and repaid his treacherous ways, but then POW AGAIN! RON'S DEAD!! i had to stop for a moment in shock after that revelation.
so yeah, i just want to say truly well done on your writing skills and a mahoosive congratulations on your imagination for story ideas because this has kept me so enticed for the past few days. so yeah, thankyou.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Now that the story is finishes I don't get many reviews, so it means a lot when someone new discovers my story and enjoys it like you do! Thanks again for reading, I'm sure if you keep on doing that you'll see that there are many more surprises to come and many ups and downs!! Feel free to review any time, Merlin knows I love reviews! :)
Lana

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I loved your story. I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading all the way through it! I'm glad you liked it! I'm actually taking some time off from my HPFF duties because sometimes real life has to come first and mine is been pretty hectic at the time, but hopefully soon I'll have enough time in my hands to update my other fanfic NeveR aLONE!
Lana

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I normally dont stick through the whole story, but with this one i did! It was really interesting, the whole way through! A good balance of events, i never felt overwhelmed by too much action as some stories tend to lean towards. I really enjoyed it and honestly i don't have any negative critisism. Thank you for writing this!

Author's Response: Aw, not having any negative critisism is probably the best compliment ever! :) I'm happy you enjoyed it and I'm glad you read it all the way to the end! Thanks again for your review and for the time you took to read through it!
Lana

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I love your story. Very imaginative.

Author's Response: Thanks! Thank you for the time you took to review and for reading! Keep going, it gets better! :)
Lana

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WHAT?!? I am so confunded right now! If that truly wasn't Scorpius, who in the world could it have been? And the fact that Harry took it quite lightly sort of shocks me. Ahh well, I'm relieved Scorpius is alive, but siriusly, that trew me in the damn loop! I hope you didn't pull that stunt again, woman! The last chapter almost gave me a heart attack and this chapter had me spinning and seeing stars!

Author's Response: Well, it's not that Harry actually took it lightly, but he was busy trying to bring Draco back to his senses and besides don't forget that he's been an Auror for almost half of his life, he's seen a lot! I guess it was just 'somebody'. Artemis couldn't track the real Scorpius down because he was with Harry, so she just chose a random victim in order to torture Draco.
Oh, and a small warning if you keep going with me story: stunts like that tend to happen a lot! :P Thanks again for your reviews and for reading!
Lana

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You're crazy! You know that? You killed Scorpius! I can't believe the nerve of it all, she's quite like her mother! It's like Hermione at Malfoy Manor all over again, only Scorpius is dead!! How could you?! I am mad...so very mad right now. I'm scared of the next chapter, truly I am, but as much as I don't want to know what could happen next, I'm addicted, and I got to know. Urgh! CURSE YOU!

Author's Response: Okay, so I take it you went on to the next chapter and read that Scorpius is in fact alive, so now go ahead and take it all back! :P Thanks for reading, I love that you're so in to the action!
Lana

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This chapter is plain heartbreaking, in a happy way of course! I'm so happy that father and son are reunited, it brought tears to my eyes. And I feel so bad for Scorpius, not having that same affection from Draco. But I'm sure Draco will come through eventually. Great Chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! I really love this chapter too, it was extremely important too! Thanks again for the time you take to read through my story!
Lana

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James left?! Oh that's well and dandy! Yet again, I can draw many parallels to him and his father. I LOVE your story so far, and my reviews are probably generic to the other hundreds of reviews you got, but I'm being drop dead sirius. There's always big surprises in your chapters and I love it. Bringning Voldemort back? A ressurection? That makes me shudder just to think of it! Well, I ought to move on to the next chapter if I want to get anywhere in this story. Great chapter!

Author's Response: I love how you chose to review chapter by chapter, I really appreciate it! Thanks for taking the time to read my story! Hope you enjoy the rest!
Lana

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You made me very bipolar in this chapter. I had tears in my eyes and was gripping the edge of my bed when I read Ginny's dream. But when I found out she was dreaming, I swore really loud. You gave me a heart attack there, woman! But don't take it as a bad thing, it's a compliment! And then with the whole Ginny and the Titanic deal, that made me grin really big. It sounds so much like Ginny. But you left me a bit confused at the ending.

Oh wait...never mid. Ginny's pregnant isn't she? Well, I ought to go onto chapter three now!

And by the way, you're doing a rather good job of keeping me distracted from doing my bookwork :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Yep, Ginny is pregnant, I know its a bit AU, but I really wanted it that way! Anyway, thanks again for reading! :)
Lana

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AH! I'm stuck in a cliffie for now. You got me hooked! Where was I when this story started, dang it, I got so much catching up to do!

A new Dark Lord is on the rise, huh? Oh dear, and he seems to be eager to attack as early as he can. Well, I'm going to prance off to the next chapter now. And by the way, I like the way you summarized your chapters for the story index. The songs you paired with them has really got me interested. Well, off I go!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading my story! I'm glad you fing it interesting and thanks for taking notice of the songs I've used! Feel free to post as many reviews you want! I love them! :)
Lana

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THIS IS AMAZING IM ADDICTED TO IT

Author's Response: Thanks! Please keep on reading, it gets better as it goes! :D Thanks again for the review!
Lana

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Really cool book very like Jk in some ways, i'm really pleased you kept them all alive which at one point I didn't you would. Please keep writing your a brilliant writer.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you liked my story! Well, I have one more WIP on HPFF, it's called Never Alone! Check it out if you want; I haven't updated it in a while but I was held up with my exams, I should start updating any day now! Thanks again for the time you took to review! :)
Lana

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This story was excellent. You did a great job. Sorry to see it end, but you definitely wrapped it up nicely.
Good work portraying the emotion between the trio and with Ginny.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Well, all stories have to end at some point, but I'm really happy that you thought the end was good! Thanks again for your review!
Lana

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This is the best story I have ever read and I'm only on the third chapter. Wow. Just wow.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it! Please keep reading, I'm sure that you'll find the following chapters even more interesting! Thanks for the review! :)
Lana

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A;SLDKFJ YOU UPDATED. IT'S HERE. THE END. A;SLDJKF.

Okay, so now that that's out of the way, I'm going to do the same thing I did a couple chapters ago, where I reviewed as I read the story. So here goes. :):):)

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You always write Harry and Ginny together so perfectly! I looove them together as you write it! Also, this:

"Honey, I'm gonna kill our love seed."

I literally laughed out loud when I read this. :D

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So that's the end... It was really good:D I loved it, and as sad as I am to see this story go, I'm glad that you finished it. A lot of the stories that are really good at first tend to be abandoned, and I'm happy that that didn't happen with this one.

I feel like there's so much to say, and I don't even know how to sum it all up into words! I just can't thank you enough for taking time to write and finish this story. (As it /is/ the reason I even have an account here on HPFF, in case you didn't know:) So even though this is it for now, I'm hoping it's not the last we'll ever hear from you:)

Well that's enough chit-chat for now. Here's the last 10/10 I'll be able to give this story! I can't wait to hear more from you in the future:)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review, and for all of your reviews so far! I'm actually pretty thrilled that you went ahead and created an account on HPFF just for my story! :) There are much more great stories in here however, you just have to look! :) And anyway, this story might be over, but I promise you Never Alone and the rest of the stories I have in my head are going to be even better! Thanks again for reading and loving Apostollo! :)
Lana

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Dibble... More then a second...

Author's Response: Um...I don't exactly understand what you mean, so I'm just gonna go ahead and say thanks for your review! :P
Lana

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Hey Lana!

Heads up!

Good story, lovely detailing and enchanting split-screens! :D

Going ahead with lotsa expectations,
M.H.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm glad you like it so far, I hope you'll keep reading and keep liking it! :) I appreciate the review as well ;)!!!
Lana

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Awww, what a happy ending! I loved how you tied everything back up, just the way that it should be :) Thanks for taking the time to respond to everyone's reviews, and for writing this awesome story! It was a fantastic ride wasn't it? And a what a great story...Well, goodbye for this story (but hopefully many more to come :D)

Author's Response: Thanks for actually leaving reviews so I can respond to them! :P I'm really glad you liked the ending and that you liked the entire story in general! Thanks for reading my story and thanks for liking it so much! :)
Lana

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It's over. *cries* I'm going to miss this story so hard. :(
Okay, I have been reading this story since chapter 16 and I instantly fell in love. You write in your own funny way what can make me cry and laugh at the same time.
Your plot was not cliche, for what I'm very grateful, because I'm quite tired of that. You had me fall in love with Harry since the first time he almost died. (oke, I admit, I love Harry no matter what) but you stayed true to his original character. Thanks for that.

You know, I'm very bad at expressing how much I love this story so here it comes: I LOVE THIS STORY. I still hope there will be a sequel or a new story apart from Never Alone. I just can't imagine myself not waiting for a chapter of one of your stories.

I read this with pleasure.
Your biggest fan, Lies. (:

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reading and thanks for loving my story! I'm really glad that you thought I had Harry right, because that was really important for me (you can tell that I too love Harry no matter what :P). Well, Never Alone is still out and well, while there is no plans for a sequel on this one, who knows, maybe on day...:) But well I still have plans for new stories, one of them is actually getting started, so wait and see.:) Thanks again for reading and for all of your reviews!
Lana

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FINALLY! I was beginning to wonder if I was ever going to see the end. OMG, its finally here, the end *tear*. It now just hit me, like a sack of bricks, "oh the pain." I can't believe two years have gone by since the whole fiasco. A lot of things have changed. Hope is now 2 years old, Albus has one more year at Hogwarts and possibly on his was into Auror training (though it sounds like some of James as rubbed off on to Albus), Lily is fifteen, and James is seventeen and in a successful band (and still crackin jokes). However, one thing will always remain and that is the LOVE that is shared between the Weasley's and the Potter's. Congrats girl, you finally finished, now lets get on to finishing "Never Alone"

Until Next Time, "Mischief Managed."

Author's Response: I know, I know, it took a while, sorry! Thanks for reading and thanks for all of your reviews throughout the story! I'm actually having a hard time with the next chapter of Never Alone, you see I had it all written and ready to post and then I deleted it by mistake and now I cannot seem to get it right... :( Anyway, I'll try and post another chapter there soon too! Thanks again for following my stories! :)
Lana

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You love near death experiences don't you? :)
Anyway, I saw this story only a few weeks ago and I just finished reading it (until this chapter), and I enjoyed it. You made tears fall from my eyes, you gave me heart attacks, you made me hold my breath, and in times you made me stare at the screen for a few moments saying to myself "WHAT JUST HAPPENED?", but I still loved it. I'm glad I found it late enough, cause now it's over and I don't have to wait for updates :p

Author's Response: Well, as I said before if this was an actual book and in need of consispency, then not all of them would have been near death experiences but some may have stuck, but as it is I couldn't bring myself to kill any of the characters I've come to love, even though my storyline may have demanded it! :D I'm really glad that you liked my story! Well, it's not over exactly there's still the epilogue! I'll try and post that soon! Thanks again! :)
Lana

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I really enjoyed this chapter. I love this story and Never Alone-cant wait for the next update! Your stories are great Thanks for writing them :)

Author's Response: Well, thank you for reading them! :) And for reviewing of course! I know it's been a while since I last updated Never Alone and trust me usually I there's onyl a week and sometimes less between my updates, but as I said to my other reviewers as well, my exams are coming up and my time is really limited those days. BUT I'm close into finally finishing the next chapter for Never Alone and then I'll try and update Apostollo too! Thanks again for taking the time to read my stories! I'm really glad you liked them! :)
Lana

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