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Review #1, by Siriusly3 Doors

6th April 2012:
I really like the way that Anna is torn between the two men and how memories keep rushing back to her, I think it's a good story with a lot of potential but I'm not certain of who all the OC's are and there isn't much time for character development as it's only a one-shot. I think a story like this would work really well as a multi chaptered story. I can feel Anna's emotions really well and how she feels trapped and the image of doors comes through very strong. Overall I liked this story :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I was actually planning to turn this into a longer piece if people enjoyed it and since you did...I think I will :)

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