haha good story lovely, I think it's a bit obvious/predictable at times but deffinitely a good story. I don't really see Draco as the shy type though...
just loved your last sentences specially "Love means smiling and feeling like you are floating. Loves means everything to everyone. Love means making a fool out of yourself." a bit cliché but exactly what love means to me :)
*BIG HUGGLES* to my prettty and stunning trippieAuthor's Response: Thank you lovely for reading and reviewing! I know it's very A/U but I loves it >.< loff you trippie! Report Review
Haha your OC is really something... I would die to go on a date with Draco Malfoy! One thing I would suggest? Maybe a little more characte development on this girl. Draco Malfoy would not say yes to just anyone. Is she a pureblood Slytherin? Then probably. A Muggle-born Gryffindor? Not so much...
But overall very cute, I enjoyed it! :)Author's Response: This was probably the most random. unthought out story I have ever written, but I love it just the same. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and your feedback! And I have to agree about the date with Draco...as long as it was Tom Felton ;) Report Review
Awwe. That was so sweet and lovely and fluffy and... *sighs* just lovely.
Though I couldn't help but laugh at how you used the word 'ball' in your stories. Especially here:
"I might just keep your precious little ball for all the pain and suffering you've caused me." -giggles madly-
I love what a little drama queen Renee is! She's too adorable and funny. Though I thought Blaise was in the same year as Draco?
Great work, dear.Author's Response: I told you it mde like zero sense lol. I might have to go back and work that out... I used a different name at first but changed it to Blaise at the last minute and didn't think about that. They are in the same year though.
I'm glad you read it and liked it and reviewed! Thank you so much lovely!
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