aw, this was so cute it was hardly BELIEVABLE! I love Ron/Hermione! :) Report Review
AW, R/HR! I haven't read a good R/Hr in a long time, and I used to love them. I must congratulate you on deciding to use some really established characters. Many people decided to use OC's or background characters because that was how they interpreted the challenge, but there was no reason more people couldn't have done characters that had background info from the books.
As for this story, I thought it was very very sweet. It is a perfect moment to choose for this kind of challenge, because the focus is on the emotional state. And you wrote it very thoughtfully, including her nervousness in a perfect Hermione-esque way. By the end, it was just so warm and fuzzy and perfectly Ron and Hermione.
They were strong and fierce and waiting for her advancement."
I adored that line. It was so wonderfully Ron. And for characters that have a lot of established backstory, people still seem to write them wrong. You have a perfect Ron/Hermione snapshot here, and I absolutely loved it. The writing was neat and sweet and simple, and you've just done a fantastic job.
Thank you!Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I'm really glad you thought it fitted the challenge, I was a bit worried with using established characters, but I had been itching to try out Ron/ Hermione, I'm happy you think I did them justice. :) I had a lot of fun writing this, and thanks for posting such a great challenge! :) Report Review
Awww :) really romantic and really great descriptions, well done!Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the descriptions, I really focused on them. Thanks for taking the time to review. Report Review
love it. Its really very very niceAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, I appreciate the review. Report Review
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