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Review #1, by inspiredl The One with the Biographies

4th August 2011:
Hi!!
Aw, I just fell in love with this storey straight away! It's really well written and all the characters you've introduced so far have been really interesting and believable. I was impressed at how well you managed to write from the POV of girls and guys equally well- since the majority of people (including myself) aren't much good at writing as the opposite sex.
I like the POVs so please try and stick with first person rather then going into third! It really is worth the effort. :)
I didn't really understand the jar of hearts comment myself- what exactly was Scorpius trying to say? :s
Anyway I love the look of all the different romances that are brewing (my fave so far is Rose/Scorpius.)
Congrats- a great first chapter and I can't wait for more!
10/10!
Lily :)

(InspiredL, Hufflepuff)

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