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Review #1, by TheHeirOfSlytherin --

5th March 2011:
Aww, I love cats! And I love Draco! And I love Scorpius! This is the perfect story! 10/10

Author's Response: hehe oh thank you love! :) I did enjoy this story! Cats, draco and scorpius all in one m what a great story! ;) hehehehe thanks for the lovely review!!! xx

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Review #2, by Celtic_Dreamer7 --

5th March 2011:
That was sad! Yes, Lucious just let him go. He had to. I can't think of it any other way! Great read, a few minor spelling mistakes but nothing that took away from the story!

Good job.

~Celtic~
Operation: Green with Envy

Author's Response: hehe thank you dear! :) Yeah i have a habit of posting one shots then getting them beta'ed so be for long i shall be getting this one beta'ed.

YAY you got that i was attempting to imply lucius setting him free!! tehehe i really enjoyed this story it was a side of draco i really liked writing, even though he was only 8, but him with scorpius was fun!!!


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Review #3, by CharlieDay --

5th March 2011:
Very Sweet Story!! I felt so sorry for Draco, losing his kitten. I love cats, so that probably helped increase my liking for this story. The plot was very good, It was an obvious flash back and had been placed in for a good reason. The only plot hole i noticed was the fact that i didn't quite understand the sudden conversion of Scorpius to being a cat person.
Overall the grammar was very good. There were some issues that i noticed, such as the line 'I laid talking to my new best friend.' That line should have been 'I lay talking to my new best friend.'
Thank you for entering my challenge!! 9/10, which is a very good score coming from me.
Charlie
xx

Author's Response: Aw thank you hun! :) Ill let you know when i have a banner up i plan to put the two kittens on it! :) Ill have to go through and touch up those grammar erros (stupid spell check) lol Im a huge cat person too, and i thought hey maybe when draco was a kid he wouldnt have been so against them.

With scorpius i tried to make it seem like he was warming up to the kitten because of how cute it was slowly through the whole story and at the ending when he realized how much a cat meant to his dad he might have wanted to be just like his dad because he was only 8 at the time and at that age your parents are often times your hero's! Sorry i didnt get that point across enough if i ever have time i might try to convey that more with some of Draco's thoughts watching him at the end! :) Thanks for the lovely review!!!

XXJess


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