{reviewid: 2764085, reviewer: 'Dominique2012'}
15th January 2013:
I.LOVE.YOUR.STORY!
I know I haven't review until now but that's just who I am. I don't usually review until I finished reading all the chapters. (I think I didn't comment yet?) Hm, if I did then my mistake; I suck at remembering. Anyways, please update when you can (: 10/10
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{reviewid: 2676798, reviewer: 'AmberLovegrove'}
25th March 2012:
This is a really awesome story! Keep up the awesomeness! ;)
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{reviewid: 2657644, reviewer: 'marauders4everr'}
11th February 2012:
I liked how brave old Sirius got stuck like that! It was hysterical! Thank for updating. I liked this chapter, it brought out the personalities of everyone really well.
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{reviewid: 2654780, reviewer: 'youdontknowme'}
5th February 2012:
WRITE MORE THIS STORY IS SO AMAZING! :)
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{reviewid: 2654762, reviewer: 'youdontknowme'}
5th February 2012:
I miss nikesh! I wish he was with the gryffindors! oh, and btw, do u watch degrassi? lol I do and that's where half your chapter pictures come from lol I love it!!! :D
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{reviewid: 2654671, reviewer: 'youdontknowme'}
5th February 2012:
Omg best chapter EVERRR!! you have an amazing writing style its so descriptive and easy to understand :) well done!
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{reviewid: 2648415, reviewer: 'JeSuisEscargot'}
24th January 2012:
Nice story but this isnt chapter 4 its chap7 :DDD
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{reviewid: 2641919, reviewer: 'Gigi'}
10th January 2012:
I love this story, please write more. I like the Mia sirius drama a lot too. Can you input snape? And you didn't fool me with the degrassi banner, hahaha I like it. Ah, Remus looks so cute in the picture above...
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{reviewid: 2641918, reviewer: 'Gigi'}
10th January 2012:
I love this story, please write more. I like the Mia sirius drama a lot too. Can you input snape? And you didn't fool me with the degrassi banner, hahaha I like it. Ah, Remus looks so cute in the picture above...
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{reviewid: 2641452, reviewer: 'Gigi'}
9th January 2012:
Hi, I really like this story, but can you clarify the pairings? It's a little confusing... Where is Peter pettigrew?
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{reviewid: 2640590, reviewer: 'Lindsey'}
8th January 2012:
I LOVE THIS STORY!
Okay so I'm finally writing a review after 2 weeks of checking back and seeing if you uploaded another chapter I figured you might need some motivation. So here it goes...
Firstly, I love the Indian twins, I'm assuming one of them is the parents of the Patil twins, right? I thought that was really cool and creative because no one ever really pays attention to them so kudos :)
Second, Mia and Sirius are adorable, I love their playful "not" romance thing
Third, I love Sirius and James relationship, it's hilarious! I was seriously laughing out loud while reading.
Fourthly, I really like how you introduced the Order of the Phoenix! I always wondered how and when they got roped into that and I really liked the way you've explained it so far.
Lastly, (for right now anyway) Lily and James are amazing together, enough said.
I really like all your characters so far and I know this is pretty general and I'm sorry for that, but I read it a couple of weeks ago and I just thought of all my favorite things off the top of my head. I'm sorry I didn't start reviewing earlier but I'm really lazy and I never review, I just really wanted you to post the next chapter :) I promise if you post it soon, I will start reviewing every single chapter and it'll be a lot more specific!
Thanks for writing such a totally awesome story!
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{reviewid: 2638198, reviewer: 'JamesSiriusPotterLover'}
3rd January 2012:
You said chapter 4. Anyway amazing story, I should be reading for English, but whatever! This story is way more interesting!!!
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{reviewid: 2628321, reviewer: 'JeSuisEscargot'}
13th December 2011:
heyy :D nice story! its realyyy verry lively
u know what i mean? like the teasing and everything is very active xD :]
but you shud realyyy write and update sooner ._.
i dont get megs character very much -- but i think thats cus i forogt all the stuff u wrote in chap12345 :p
so WRITE FASTER
and ur cool XD
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{reviewid: 2616356, reviewer: 'oliverwoodssecretlover'}
15th November 2011:
what did everyone pick up on? Lily knows about Remus, huh? Pete's a slimeball, Meg's family life sucks. Did I miss anything? (: great chapter, update soon please!
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{reviewid: 2616353, reviewer: 'oliverwoodssecretlover'}
15th November 2011:
Yay! I really like James and Sirius. You've got their tone spot-on! It's wonderous! (:
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{reviewid: 2616347, reviewer: 'oliverwoodssecretlover'}
15th November 2011:
No, this is not terrible! It's great! (: especially for your first fanfic! I decided to write some fanfic after hp7 part 2 came out, too, because I needed a new hp outlet :P
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{reviewid: 2616143, reviewer: '19%20whitehorse'}
15th November 2011:
I LOVE YOUR STORY!! But one of my favorite parts has got to be the dialogue, its fast paced but interesting and I can totally follow the conversation :) Please update soon :D
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{reviewid: 2578327, reviewer: 'Hellooo'}
26th August 2011:
Hey
i like how the stories flowing but im hella confused
wht the hell is nikesh's last name??
how many are there?
i think u shud work on editting.. :P
the plot is nice though!
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{reviewid: 2559434, reviewer: 'Padfoot_The_Author33'}
2nd August 2011:
if youre an otter and you can type then that is amazing! Haha just kidding!
I love all the characters, but my first impression of Meg wasn't so great. She seems a bit grumpy. But! I shall not judge! I SHALL READ ON!
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{reviewid: 2559418, reviewer: 'Padfoot_The_Author33'}
2nd August 2011:
I LOVE SILLY LOVE SONGS!
My life's ambition is to hug Sir James Paul McCartney!
Oh, and great story too XD
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{reviewid: 2549892, reviewer: 'fodsjfosajfdo'}
19th July 2011:
Indian isn't a language.
Hindi is the most widely spoken language in India along with English and there are 27 official languages in the country. If you're going to have an Indian character, do a tiny bit of research, please.
Story is good other than that though.
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