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Review #1, by emeraldeyes77 October 30th 1975

5th April 2011:
I like her, she reminds me of myself ;D

Author's Response: I'm glad you like her(:

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Review #2, by emeraldeyes77 May 21st, 2003

4th April 2011:
Why to leave a cliffhanger! Please please please write longer chapters, less then a thousand words just isn't doing it xD
May wanna look over this chapter there were some spelling/grammar mistakes just an FYI.

And thank you for mentioning me! It made my day :)

Emm :)

Author's Response: I'll try my best to write longer chapters(:
I will look over that. I'm glad that it made your day you deserve it!(:

Thanks(:


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Review #3, by emeraldeyes77 September 22nd, 1975 -- Hogwarts

6th March 2011:
Anther great chapter! Can't wait to read more :)

em :)

Author's Response: Haha. I think your about the only one who gives me reviews on this story.(: Thank you very much it makes me want to wirte more. I'm very glad that you like it thank you(:

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Review #4, by emeraldeyes77 December 24th, 1993

2nd March 2011:
Wow Harry and Ginny were young when they had James. If James is between a new born and about a year Ginny had to have been about 18 when she had him.

This sounds like it's gonna be a good story. It's an original idea :) just one thing when Ginny was talking to Hermione about the letter Hermione said "but thats impossible that was fifth year and Sirius was still in Azkaban." That's wrong. The start of Harry/Hermione/Ron's 3rd year was 1993. 1995 was their fifth year. And as we very well know Sirius was long escaped Azkaban by their fifth year. Which means when this letter was supposed to be sent Sirius had already escaped but it obviously never got to him. So you just might want to fix that.

But other then that it looks good! Can't wait to keep reading!

xoxo, Em :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much for telling me that. I was trying to look for the year everywhere but thats all i got was 1995 thank you very much(:

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Review #5, by OneOfAKind December 24th, 1993

2nd March 2011:
Hey! I thought that it is a really good original idea - i don't know why you haven't got any other reviews! Apart from a few spelling mistakes and whatever its really v. good!
OneOfAKind

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it and i will look at the spelling misakes now. (:

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