really really great!!! the writing of rose's emotions are phenomenal. would suggest changing the title from "undone: the story" to just "undone", but i see that you have a one-shot entitled that so idk. having "the story" part is just kind of discrediting. but i love the story and i hope you update soon!! Report Review
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