Wow! That was really good! How do you do it? It makes you feel like the narrator hates her, but loves her at the same time, you know? And the ending. "In death, you're finally perfect"... so dramatic! I LOVED it! :)Author's Response: i am so sorry about my late reply! thank you so much for your review, it's so kind!! i'm very glad you brought up the love-hate thing, that's what i wanted to convey so thank you bunches (: ahh you are too kind!! xx Brenna Report Review
i actually love it :) lily comes across as a bit of a bitch though which i dont think she was cos of the fact that she died for harry. but i loved the plot and the ideas :)Author's Response: i agree, i would like to think she changed after getting out of Hogwarts (: thank you so much, i really appreciate that! Report Review
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