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This story is really amazing and I enjoy reading it very much. It's a shame you haven't updated it for quite some time now..
The way Gracie can be so kind to her friends, but kind of bitchy to people she doesn't like all that much gives her a strong character. I would love to find out what you were planning to do with Grace and Sirius :)
And I do hope that you are going to continue the story. :) Report Review
Hey! I'm sorry this review's taken so long to get up... I ended up being slammed with homework! But I'm here now. (:
I quite like Gracie. I love the way you opened this; I think it was original and really telling of what's to come. It was a really nice way to get us into the story.
I'm confused as what the relationship between everyone is. Is Gracie a Gryffindor? And why was she at the other table? Why is she friends with Remus but not Sirius? This might have been intentionally vague, but if it was, I'd try adding a bit more ambiguity to parts, as opposed to saying that she hated Black. I'm not sure, that just really confused me.
Other than that, though, this was really nice! I enjoyed it. (:
-Jasmine Report Review
This is amazing. You're characterization is so realistic! Please update soon, I can't wait to read more!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! An update will be in soon! Report Review
What the hell just happened indeed. Like the story though:) You're a good writer. But I'm very confused with the last part... So you better update soon:D
XxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much. I was hoping for there to be an update soon but my hard drive crashed on my laptop so there might be a small wait on this one. Sorry! Thank you for the review! Report Review
I really liked this! Grace is interesting aswell as 'her boys'. I have never came across a story where they don't like their house before. I really liked it and can't wait for the next chapter :) update soon!Author's Response: Awe, my first review on this story. Thank you so much! Grace is something special, I think, not much like other members of the cliche Gryffindor house. The odd ball out without being cutely abnormal. The next chapter will be up when I get home from my holiday, so expect an update in the next week or so! Thank you so much for the review! Report Review
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