I'm loving all the George and Georgelina love on your page. Even if this was for a challenge, I was thrilled to find this pairing on your page. There is really too little of them on the archives. :)
It was very sweet to see Angelina cooking dinner and preparing the table for a romantic dinner with her husband. :) I especially liked the bit where the tomato plant came zooming in the window because she hadn't remembered to be specific. I'd imagine that she was quite nervous thinking about telling him her news. :) It really shone through in your writing. I found it interesting that Angelina was sort of at odds with Verity and that they had a less than friendly history!! that's a really interesting take on their relationship with one another.
It was brilliant to see a bit of George too!! I love that he's still close with Lee and of course with Ron, too. The sniffing skiving snack boxes is such a good idea!! I always thought that they'd taste awful. lol. Annnd him assuming Angelina wanted to move because of the blue mice, too cute. George is such a babe.
This was a thoroughly enjoyable one-shot!! So glad I was able to stumble upon it on your page. :)Author's Response: I love George- I was actually meaning to write this pairing when I got the challenge, so, you know, it all works out well :D
I like Angelina a lot, so I hope I did okay portraying her. I remember making an effort to try and include these slightly humorous details because I tend to get (as you probably saw from my other one-shots) quite morbid and depressing when writing about people who die or are close to people who die.
Thank you so much for the review again, you're the sweetest! Report Review
Aw, the ending was so sweet :)
I've always thought George and Angelina wold make a great couple but I have never read a fic about them before.
There were a couple of grammar mistakes here and there but nothing a quick re-read and edit won't fix :)
I really enjoyed this and think you have done a great job with it.
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First I must say thank you for entering and completing my challenge. It was a really easy read it just flowed so well together. I liked all of the descriptive paragraphs you had through out the oneshot they didnt detract from it but they actually gave it more to it. I also liked how you had the mention of Fred in this oneshot as well. I'm sure its still hard for both of them especially George. The ending was pretty good too with the little bit of humor. Great Job. Again thank you for entering my challenge.
Operation: Green with EnvyAuthor's Response: Thank you for reviewing, this is my first completed challange story. :)
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