Awww, I'm a sucker for any Rose/Scorpius fic. I thought this was adorable! (:Author's Response: They're one of my favorite ships. I'm glad you liked it Report Review
It was so cute! Delicious fluff!Author's Response: Thanks a bunches. Glad you liked it. Report Review
Very funny, short but sweet!! :DAuthor's Response: Thanks a bunches, glad you liked it. Report Review
this was funny. i liked it especially scorpious's internal dialogue. it seemed so frantic and teh way you wronte it in short snappy sentences really carried out his sense of panic more than anythig the was thinking at the moment. the story was kinda short so i dont really know what to say more, except that i would have loved it if it had been longer, because i would have liked more of this!Author's Response: I'm always getting reviews telling me my one-shots are too short. I will work on it.
I'm glad you liked it, funny was what I was going for Report Review
awww :) thats really sweet :)Author's Response: Thanks. It was fun to write, I'm glad you liked it. Report Review
Only been on this sight a bit but this is definitely my favorite so far. The way you right it is really funny, and ... good better than everyone else who just types paragraphs of speech and hope it turns itself into an interesting plot line :)Author's Response: That's a huge compliment for me, thanks so much! Report Review
hmm I can't really put my finger on it but something troubled me about this piece, maybe it was the short and very breif thoughts, try to work in a bit more complexity tell us why things happen?
but then the thoughts and conversations worked very well with the present tense, so I don't know what it is haha maybe I'm just being silly :)
Liked the plot and the idea very much and you have a very good feel for the thinking part definitely! :)
*huggles*Author's Response: Wow, glad you're being honest with me. I'm glad you liked it in the end, it was really fun to work with.
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