I can't imagine how he would've ever lived with it, watching as James and Lily lived out the life he wanted with her.
I said it at the beginning, and I'll say it again. I don't like Sirius/Lily. I gave this a try because, after your last story I read, I thought maybe you could open me up to it. I can definitively say that I can't read it.
It was beautiful, and all encompassing, and I wish I could have loved it more, loved it as it deserved to be.
Bravo to you.Author's Response: He has to, and he realizes that, sad as it might be.
Thank you for giving it a try, though. It means a lot to me.
And thank you so very much for all of your wonderful reviews.
I hope you read more! :D Report Review
Poor Sirius; he's found the end.
Bravo to you.Author's Response: Unfortunately, :/
Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
I made a promise to myself to always review, but damn, I just want to get to the next chapter.
I think that kind of spoke for itself, so I'm off!
Bravo to you.Author's Response: I hope you enjoy it!
Thank you so much, :D Report Review
I have an aversion to Sirius/Lily. I can't figure out why, but it makes me cringe. I feel sort of like throwing up when I try to write it.
But you have it in the folds so delicately, that I didn't notice until Sirius saw her at the train.
Brilliant start, bravo to you.Author's Response: You know, I really had a hard time accepting it for the longest time. It was Kay's "Macabre" that finally turned me. Truly one of the greatest stories on this site.
I hope you continue to enjoy, and thank you for reviewing! Report Review
I did really like this. You could add more detail and extra plot points. Thank you for writing it I enjoyed it!! The quality of writing is great.Author's Response: Thank you so much, :D
I hope you check back for the last two chapters.
I'm so glad you're enjoying so far! Report Review
This was really well written, I liked it alot.Author's Response: Awh, thank you so very much for reading and reviewing! :D Report Review
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