Its a great plot. There aren't so many stories around that have Ron as the main character, and so this is kind of refreshing.
Scarlet Red's cool. She's as fiesty as her name. And she reminds me a lot of Scarlett O'Hara, whom I adore
All in all, I eagerly await your next chapterAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for your review, it just totally made my day!!! I love reading Ron/oc stories, youre right there are not alot of them out there as the main point of the story. I thought i'd make my oc a little different than the usual. She's definitely tough and fiesty and you'll get to find out why soon enough. :) Thanks again. Report Review
This is really good! You've got Ron down to a T. A little suggestion- you may want to put a few commas in to make it easier to read, so that the reader knows when to pause.
But apart from that, it's great! I've added it to my favourites as well. Can't wait for your next chapterAuthor's Response: Thank you for your review and putting this on your favorites. That totally made my day!! I was so worried I Ron was going to be off, i'm trying my best though. I'll try putting more commas to make it easier, thank you for the suggestion. Glad you like it so far, more is on its way! Report Review
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